How to kill a story

It always was a rage thing with Gohan. He’s going to be almost unstoppable now.
And it was easy to follow the fighting. Very clearly written.

i dropped everything when i saw this was updated! the fights about to start and I’m so nervous. and when Gohan told Piccolo to fck off i actually gasped. excited for the next chapter!

I really love this one & have read it several other times lately. Please update again soon..

Why didn’t I realize the other fighters would be brought back to help? Loved this chapter!

crying in the club (scenes when Gohan saw everyone was perfect). i have such a bad feeling about this but i guess the future (and you) only can only tell!

XD LOL! All I could think of was Emperor's New Groove. Poor, poor Piccolo XD The battle scene was good I liked it!

I was gonna say this the first time that song popped up but I forgot as I wanted to get to the next chapter XD Its just a bunch of Hocus Pocus (I LOVE that movie XD ) Honestly I can understand having Gohan behave the way he is. This is an example of him behaving out of cannon with a good explanation. As for Vegeta, he has always had a soft spot for Gohan.

Ooooh I liked this chapter :D

Yeah, I doubt this is a one-time thing. Also, KITTY! I love kitties! I have a baby kitty sleeping next to me xp

Yay! I'm glad they both became Super Saiyan's close to one another XD. Also, I can't wait to find out what is in that egg xp

Oh good, I was hoping they would move into the Son house :D

Awww Vegeta is actually being nice XD Well, he always did seem to have a soft spot for Gohan. Not as big of one as Piccolo does, but he still has one XD

During the flashback, Piccolo has of Tsuki speaking of what her brother did has some words jammed together without spaces between them.

I liked how you did this. At first, I thought Gohan and Vegeta where going to go super sayian, which I would have been fine with, but having Broly show up works just as well XD

Okay, Amat needs to go down! Poor, poor Gohan Q_Q XD