Reviews for Of the Moon
Guest chapter 8 . 7/4/2019
How to kill a story
nancy103 chapter 65 . 7/4/2019
It always was a rage thing with Gohan. He’s going to be almost unstoppable now.
And it was easy to follow the fighting. Very clearly written.
ashlovesdbz chapter 64 . 4/20/2019
i dropped everything when i saw this was updated! the fights about to start and I’m so nervous. and when Gohan told Piccolo to fck off i actually gasped. excited for the next chapter!
Yami's Sweetheart chapter 63 . 3/14/2019
I really love this one & have read it several other times lately. Please update again soon..
nancy103 chapter 62 . 12/29/2018
Why didn’t I realize the other fighters would be brought back to help? Loved this chapter!
ashlovesdbz chapter 62 . 12/28/2018
crying in the club (scenes when Gohan saw everyone was perfect). i have such a bad feeling about this but i guess the future (and you) only can only tell!
Child Of Dreamz chapter 46 . 9/4/2018
XD LOL! All I could think of was Emperor's New Groove. Poor, poor Piccolo XD The battle scene was good I liked it!
Child Of Dreamz chapter 39 . 9/4/2018
I was gonna say this the first time that song popped up but I forgot as I wanted to get to the next chapter XD Its just a bunch of Hocus Pocus (I LOVE that movie XD ) Honestly I can understand having Gohan behave the way he is. This is an example of him behaving out of cannon with a good explanation. As for Vegeta, he has always had a soft spot for Gohan.
Child Of Dreamz chapter 31 . 9/4/2018
Ooooh I liked this chapter :D
Child Of Dreamz chapter 29 . 9/4/2018
Yeah, I doubt this is a one-time thing. Also, KITTY! I love kitties! I have a baby kitty sleeping next to me xp
Child Of Dreamz chapter 27 . 9/4/2018
Yay! I'm glad they both became Super Saiyan's close to one another XD. Also, I can't wait to find out what is in that egg xp
Child Of Dreamz chapter 23 . 9/3/2018
Oh good, I was hoping they would move into the Son house :D
Child Of Dreamz chapter 22 . 9/3/2018
Awww Vegeta is actually being nice XD Well, he always did seem to have a soft spot for Gohan. Not as big of one as Piccolo does, but he still has one XD
Child Of Dreamz chapter 21 . 9/3/2018
During the flashback, Piccolo has of Tsuki speaking of what her brother did has some words jammed together without spaces between them.

I liked how you did this. At first, I thought Gohan and Vegeta where going to go super sayian, which I would have been fine with, but having Broly show up works just as well XD
Child Of Dreamz chapter 16 . 9/3/2018
Okay, Amat needs to go down! Poor, poor Gohan Q_Q XD
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