| Reviews for Scream |
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Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 10/9/2014 That was hot now we need to see that in one of the episodes and thousands of fangirls (and boys) will go wild. |
Graysonation chapter 1 . 6/3/2014 Well, da-yummmmmmmmm. That was so addictively, adorably hot that I kinda had to shoot through the whole thing in one go. Not really one for music-fics, but you've got this talent with words, sorta like blueorleander93, with it sounding just as much like commentary as a story. And the songs were well-chosen, went quite well with the direction of the story. I, too, am hugely addicted to "Scream." And a good one, at that. I loved how you had the team split, with all of the girls protecting Reid, and all of the 'serious' ones together; really, kind of a heady mix, with Spencer and Garcia on one side, and Rossi and Elle on another ( I find them to be two of the strangest pairings on here, and yet, they totally and completely work, right?). Anyhoo - no worries about the kissing scene, it didn't suck. And the end was a trifecta of kinda hot, incredibly sweet, and quite believable. And the way you write Reid . . . perfect. Sorta shy and awkward, but once you drag him out of that nerd-encrusted shell, he's a force to be reckoned with. (Oh, again - I laughed out loud over that line of Reid having a fantastic body with just a few too many clothes covering it up. Isn't even a pair of SOCKS covering too much of that delicious genius's body? :) ) Can't wait to get on some more of your Criminal Minds stories! Yippee, this was awesome-sauce. XD |
vanes2728 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014 I LOVED your story! Super entertaining the sparks between Derek en Spencer are so real, i wish i was one of them (they are both hot!) I am hoping you will write a sequel to this story! I'm dying to know how it goes on (the morning after and again after ;-) ) Please say you will ? (puppy-dog eyes) Greetz |
nannily chapter 1 . 3/17/2013 Oh, I loved this. The song and the fic. :D |
arminarlertsbooty chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 There are two words for this, I have no idea how you managed to mix the two but you did so perfectly: Fluffy and Yummy (like cotton candy :3) |
MCat04 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012 You did a good job with the kiss. And I read your profile. I am amazed that you are such a good writer at such a young age. Congratulations! |
People Person I'm Not chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 Very nicely done! I don't blams you for ending where you did...I'd've done the same. |
eliana152 chapter 1 . 8/30/2012 Loved this! |
maryhell chapter 1 . 8/30/2012 The kissing most certainly didn't suck. It was a refreshing change not to hear the usual phrases such as "I touched his bottom lip asking for entrance". What you did made it much more real and sexy. Loved the whole story. |