It would be really funny if Pod catches them doing the deed ahahahaahahahahaahah!

Woooo, I loved it! I'll definitely check out the sequel story! :D

Bravo. Well done.

Great story I love it :)

I really love your stuff, Bratanimus. You are Queen of the lovely/agonizing/touching/heartbreaking moments.

Ooooh, what's not to love here! :D

The characterization is perfect, the story makes absolute sense, I could very much imagine this happening.
And the ending made me happy, since I expected them to die... But Super-Podrick came to the rescue and that made this story even more awesome! Nice :D

This is awesome. You're awesome. Everything is awesome.

Your characterization is really great, and like one of your reviewers said, your writing style is different from GRRM's, but you've matched the characters with your own voice, and that's fantastic. GRRM only gives us so much - it's refreshing to read more of them in someone else's perspective, and you've done them justice. Makes me love this even more.

Now I want this to be close to the canon. Which is probably going to spell doom to my feelings. But whatever, it's okay.

So glad you wrote and posted this!

Loved it. Would be brilliant if canon turned out to be something like this!

Really, this is just an excellent, complex piece of work that manages to capture and accurately portray what I love about this pairing, and expand without seeming unrealistic.

Wow this was adorable! Great work!

I really liked this. Well done

Pod to the rescue!

this is fantastic please write more jaime/brienne

you capture them SO WELL, I got butterflies reading this!

Maybe you could have left us wondering if they would be killed the next day or not, but apart from that, I found they fic wonderful. Really, it was just perfect.

This is wonderful. I really hope you continue!

This is honestly one of the best Jaime/Brienne fics I've ever read. It really seems like it could be part of the books, the dialogue is so in character. I almost started squealing! Absolutely amazing.