So cute! I liked how it was short and sweet. Your grammar and choice of words are most enjoyable. Thanks for writing this~

That was so beautiful! I ship it so hard! :33

TuT
oh god
please keep going!
please!
this is amazing, an i know i know, youre working on uwsg, but pleeeeeeeese!
you need to write like
20 more chapters!
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i love you
you are an amazing writer and i totaly, no homo pale love you!
hey!
hit me up on cloudsdale, its awesome!
ill be under the name railin in the homestuck chat room!

All of the love. All of it. You are just the best author.

This is insanely cute! :D

i loved this! Good job ;)

good writting , i love ur fan fiction of solkar buzzing of a bee

This fic is beautiful.
It flows smoothly, great pace, everything is where it should be. It's a good idea that you made original in your own way! I could really picture this happening! Outstanding work! /)u(\

And then they both get hit by a bus... God what the fuck, mind, why do you gotta ruin a perfectly fantastic piece of fiction with your twisted mindfuckery!? -_- but seriously, that was awesome!

That was really great :O Perfect feels! You really made that "moment" prominent, I just loved it.

Awesome! Dirk actually let Jake take his glasses off! Get it!

You know...i think short love stories this one are the best. The don't ever need anything else because there just so perfect the way they are. I love this story. A lot.

yes. this pleases me. good.

there was an I that was supposed to be 'in' but that was the only typo i caught.