Reviews for This Pretense
CrazyShipper101 chapter 11 . 7/2
THIS WAS FANTASTIC! I LOVED IT ALL AND IT WAS EXACTLY WHAT I NEEDED! Just the right amount of slight drama and jealousy and the biggest and bestest amount of love possible. I loved their interactions and the two dolts warmed my heart by being together. (SPOILERAnd the proposal OMFG YESSS! THAT WAS FREAKING CREATIVE AND SMART AF! THAT WAS GREAT AND GENIUS! All in all, THIS was great! It was sweet and loving and I couldn’t have asked for anything better! I LOVE USUK AND ESPECIALLY THOSE UKUS MOMENTS!
Lmb111514 chapter 11 . 8/14/2019
This story was great; I really enjoyed it!
randomfandomboredom chapter 11 . 1/13/2019
I love your interpretation of the Omegaverse world, and how it wasn't too angsty. I really enjoyed reading this, so kudos to you dude!
AliceCullen3 chapter 11 . 11/17/2017
LOVE IT!
Alice offline chapter 1 . 10/4/2017
Oh my God!
I loved the whole fic (even when I'm reviewing it at first chapter, IKR?)
But I'm in love UKUS in this way.
It was amazing to read.
Thefabulousme chapter 11 . 2/17/2017
AGHHHHHHH THIS IS SO CUTEEEEEEE WHAT DO I DO NOW ITS FINISHED AGHHHHHHH
Yuuko chapter 11 . 12/12/2016
This was so fricking touching! I LOVED IT AND I WAS SO MOVED I CRIED. CRIED. I SHIP THEM SO HARD DAMMIT.
Saaemi chapter 11 . 9/6/2016
Aww~ This was great. I binge-read it the whole thing. Alfred was so messy lol. Arthur is such a sweetheart. _

Anyway, thanks for writing it. I really appreciate the effort you put in it. And the fact that is has an ending. Damn it, too many fics are abandoned/unfinished. TT_TT
DarkLeader16 chapter 11 . 6/24/2016
beautiful
Emeraldinhereyes chapter 11 . 4/10/2016
Omegaverse is one of my favorite things ever! I love how contrasting their relationship is when comparimg enemies on the field (not exactly enemies, more like reluctant and aggressive allies) to that glorious fluff of dating. Did you have a specific character in mind for Sophie perchance (like Hungary)? I didn't think you did but I imagined her as elizabeta.
Lula chapter 11 . 1/29/2016
I read this story all the time and gosh I just love the ending so much. This is like my favorite story ever! 3
Estelluerite chapter 11 . 1/2/2016
Wow.

That's all I can say.

Just, wow.

This story was written quite a while ago, but I just found this. And it's truly a "gem", as what I like to call stories I throughly enjoy.

I've found many Omegaverse stories, but I never finished reading any of them because many of them depicted the Omega (who was usually Arthur) as a shy, timid, housewife type of person, while the Alpha (usually Alfred) as a sexy, manly, aggressive beast that only knows how to dominate. I personally don't see Alfred or Arthur like those types of Omegas and Alphas, I see them closer to equals. So, in my eyes, you described them perfectly. I really like how Alfred was an omega (UKUS FTW!), but still retained those Alpha-like qualities to make him seem more like the canon!Alfred (In which I still believe that he is uke while England is seme). Same with Arthur, vice versa.

This was an extremely well-written story in my opinion (in comparison to my own, which are crap) with no grammatical errors nor story flaws that I could detect. I also like your chapter length- just long enough so that the chapter doesn't drag out for too long, but not to short so that it's no fun to read.

You probably won't even see this review, or you might think this is too long and exaggerated, but I still want to say:

Thank you for this fic. Really.
Karano chapter 11 . 5/3/2015
Omg...this was probably my favourite Omegaverse fanfic. Holy god.
It even has UKUS! Not USUK! UKUS is my OTP and I'm so happy that I've randomly stumbled on your fanfic's page. If you can believe it, I was searching for some lame fic on Google and yours was at the end of page 2! (turns out that fic doesn't exist anymore but oh well)
You rock.
Karano chapter 9 . 5/3/2015
Thank you thank you thank you for doing such a great dynamic.
I've been in like, 5 fandoms I think, and I've read dozens from each, and everywhere. Every-damn-where. There were relationship dynamic elements that didn't work. And by that, I mean you were led to the inevitable question: Why do genders still exist?
It seemed so pointless, so wrong and repulsive. I hated them all.
...You restored my faith in humanity and Omegaverse fanfics.
Thank you again you wonderful human being. Your fanfic is one of a kind.
FireFox Vixen chapter 11 . 2/24/2015
Love!
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