I love this story so much... But why are they hooking up at Cato's house?

Oh. My. God. Incredible

You have a magical way with words. I always think that there's no way my heart could possibly ache more for Cato and Clove, but your stories really bring to life not only the pain in her death, but the pain that they, and I'm sure several other people from career districts, must experience at home. I love how flowing your stories are, this one especially, how it floods so easily into the next snippet and creates an absolutely beautiful and terribly heart breaking scene. Absolute art.

How can you write so perfectly? My Clato feels are killing because of this oneshot! You are one of the best Clato writers here, you really are!

I really liked how these two seperate scenes connected, I thought it was really IC and how I imagined Clove and Cato's relationship to be before the games. Awesome job, you're really talented.
xx Nina

This is so devastating! The theme of Cato's heart being her lullaby, and staying with him being that emotional connection... Beautifully written, it definitely all fit in together perfectly, and so very sad.

Heartbreaking. :( I love how you tied his heartbeat into something more symbolic to Clove, and I liked how you led up to the very end during the Games. It definitely gave me more insight into two characters that weren't touched upon much in the actual books. Keep writing!

i love this so much! i was literally crying by the end!

Thanks for breaking my heart

holy cow that was good! You did such a good job with both characters and your writing was beautiful! I can't wait to read more from you in the future!

Ugh, my heart. How freaking beautiful and painful. Lovely job.

This was amazing really. Beautifully done

This was really well-written, and very true to form of how I feel Cato and Clove and their relationship was. Thanks for writing it. :)

That was very beautiful. Sometmes I think I can't read any more fics about Clove's death scene but then someone like you freshens it up all over again. I really loved the connection between the two and I thought it worked really well. You also did a lovely job of keeping them in character, even in love. That was a pleasure to read, thank you.

This is...wonderful. No, wait; the writing is wonderful, but this still made me tear up. *sniffle* It's so SAD! It takes skill to make people sympathize with a "bad" character. Well done.