ohmygods the ending gave me chills. great job!

Stahp being tragic. It's painful.

hey, just in case you don't know who i am, it's someone from school whose name starts with an "f'. And, no, IT'S NOT FRANCHESCA! I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE GET MY NAME MIXED UP.

i have all but one question. Why is he gone? When? How? DETAILS!

Haha!
"It's NOT a date!"
Keep writing!

Awww... How sweet!

Oh my gods this is great...
I'm missing something...
Oh, yeah. HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY PERCY!

THE ENDING./3

I'm crying now. Thank you very, very much.(;

Jking.

Awww, poor Sally. I think what you could have done for the Percy's second quest is have her panic a bit more, because the first time, she was kind of in limbo, so this is the first quest she actually is informed about. Other than that, it's pretty good. I like how the point of view of the characters you write about is different than what people usually think.

Aww, so sweet and sad and beautiful and—I just—wow. In a good way.

WOW that was good. since percy is in the book, he is 16. but he is 18! idk

That was very well done. Sally is a brave woman; sometimes waiting is the hardest thing of all, and I think you've shown that.

So sad... Amazing

Aww that was sweet. I'm still mad at Hera...
Happy Birthday! (And I thought he was nineteen...ah, well.)