| Reviews for Guardian Angel |
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   Genesis Vakarian chapter 13 . 4/6 You love this work because it gives you the chance to embrace Carmine as a brother,as a friend and fellow warrior should. Keep working on it as you see fit brother. I will always remain a loyal follower of this great amazing story. |
| Blue Backpack chapter 13 . 2/5 UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE |
| FearKat chapter 13 . 1/1 Beautiful, excellent story! I look forward to your updates |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2019 I’ve read all the chapters. I love this beautiful story |
| Genesis Vakarian chapter 10 . 11/25/2018 Take your time JoelCoxriley. We, the readers, can wait until you have the time to update this truly fucking amazing story. We can think about how it might go either way with Ben and Alura's relationship and hope for the best with either way you choose to write it. And if you wish, please feel free to pm me Genesis Vakarian if you want to bounce ideas off of me. And maybe if you are having a hard time thinking of something for a chapter I can help in giving ideas and possible plot bunnies as well. So, please feel free to look at my Gears Of War stories that I have going and see if they give you ideas. |
| The95will chapter 12 . 3/1/2015 As a s story, It's pretty interesting. We're still learning about Alura and I've become invested into her character. The time of all the characters still behaving like themselves was a nice touch. Though I do believe Baird is more of a endearing asshole rather than being a asshole. I think Alura is done lovely to her development and character. The only thing I think the story needs to do is expand upon developing Carmine as well. All we have to go off of was that he has family and a kind heart. The new generation of children is an excellent plot turn as it relates to Alura, and to world of Sera. They're sheltered of the complete horrible world they live in. The Snowmen was a nice touch and warms the would because of bleak the situation really is. If you need help. Feel free to PM me. Have an excellent day. |
| Genesis Vakarian chapter 12 . 8/2/2014 Gads, this may become ugly. But hell, I love this kind of story. Pardon my french here. |
| Genesis Vakarian chapter 8 . 8/2/2014 Loved this chapter and the others before it |
| Genesis Vakarian chapter 2 . 8/2/2014 Good idea and well thought out too. |
| Genesis Vakarian chapter 1 . 7/28/2014 This was amazing simply amazing. |
| St33lStrif3 chapter 12 . 2/24/2014 I like it. Yay for new antagonists! |
| JC chapter 11 . 2/15/2014 Is Alura going to find her daughter anytime soon? xD |
| Doomslayer10000 chapter 11 . 1/14/2014 Still an awesome story! |
| JC chapter 11 . 1/2/2014 Yay, Ben is gonna be ok! Baird can be SUCH a dick... But believe it or not, he is useful,so...yeah |
| The Helghast Marine chapter 11 . 12/27/2013 what happens next ! KEEP IT UP ! |
