| Reviews for Breaking the Rules |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 8/26/2017 Please update |
 harryfansuper chapter 6 . 6/7/2014 please continue with this story. it is super creative and interesting. if it's posted in its entirerty on another site please message me and let me know |
| UnicornMister chapter 6 . 8/25/2013 Wow, this is one intense story. Suffice it to say that the bondage scenes are very erotic, at least for me they are. They're so creative amd well thought out too. I'm eagerly awaiting another update. And as a side note you are missing the 'e' in 'breaking' in the title. Same word, different meaning. If you would like a beta for this story I would be more than willing to volunteer |
| Salunatic chapter 6 . 8/4/2013 All I can say is, poor girls. Good for Luna though. I always knew that there was something more to what she is. Maybe not this dark or sadistic, but hey, anythings possible. I do love her insanity though. Really well portrayed. Details wise, spectacular. I liked how you ended the chapter. Basically made Ginny suffer both helplessness, humiliation, intense discomfort, pain, and possibly, unwanted pleasure? Only minus area is the spellings, some slight sentencing problems. I think there was a paragraph that was kinda chopped off. Can't remember which chapter or where, but its there. Other than that, well, well done. Keep up the sadism and pain. Looking forward for more. -Salunatic |
| Salunatic chapter 1 . 8/4/2013 Wow. I'm not exactly a fan of bondage, but I do love her sadism. Kind of reminds me of me. Her sadistic grin. I can almost imagine her evil laugh. -Salunatic |
| Torigagged chapter 6 . 8/1/2013 Love that Ginny & Hermione are tied and gagged in this love to see Luna mae them worship her stockinged feet with kisses & toe sucking. |
| Jace chapter 5 . 7/30/2013 I wish that there was more actual sex, and less evil Luna. |
| Solsticio21 chapter 4 . 12/8/2012 Wow that was pretty dark and intense. I hope you continue soon. I really want to know what's next. |
| Solsticio21 chapter 2 . 12/8/2012 So her revenge is because of the love of Ginny and Hermione? How did they come to this and why she started to plan the whole thing? Great story, just curious. |
| lynettecullen chapter 1 . 11/18/2012 I wonder how this'll turn out. |
| GenryuBlack94 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 It is a nice work if I say. I Really Hope you Update Soon. |
| basugays chapter 3 . 10/30/2012 Num, can't wait for more xx |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/24/2012 Nice work ;D A few little errors but the story line and description are sound! MOAR PLAES! |
| RumbleRoar811 chapter 3 . 9/23/2012 smutty |
| chm01 chapter 2 . 9/13/2012 wow |
