I SQUEED. This is adorable. And lovely. I am in awe of it. I love the way you structured it and the use of Luna is inspired and Lorcan is so PRECIOUS and Louis is just - his thoughts at the ending and everything, I really cannot describe how adorable it is. This is just heartwarming and good.

Nice work, very cute the two of them. Keep updating

I like this story, it was quite sweet and I like your Louis. Well done ;)

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A very interesting piece. Keep updating

I already told you that I love love love this but I feel it needs repeating. It's just lovely. I adore how you've written the founders, and I think my favorite line (although it's hard to choose) is "She is intelligent enough to be his friend and not his enemy, sensible enough not to trust him" because it really gives an excellent picture of Salazar and Rowena, and also the dynamics between all of the founders.

Gorgeous work!

I loved this fic, it was pretty well written and your portrayals of Rowena and Salazar were spot-on. I loved the way Salazar had such potential, how great he was, and yet how ambition burned and possessed him and how dangerous it was turning. Rowena's lucid point of view made it all the more interesting, and her excitement about her own experiment came through very clearly. Great work :)