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I'm surprised Gohan didn't catch how that threat made no sense at all.

I mean let's think it through.

1. If Gohan went Rogue (villain I assume), then it would be obvious that Batman and the League wouldn't be trying to help him get back home anymore. Who helps their enemies after all?

2. He's telling the planet buster that if he went rogue, they'd do their level best to keep him on their planet. Who sets up a hostage situation with billions of people on the line?

3. Now, maybe I misunderstood and when Batman said "Rogue" he meant going off on his own separately from the League (without becoming a criminal). Which would make even less sense, because then he's basically telling Gohan that he has no freedom and that if he ever wants to get back home he better get with the program.

4. If Gohan DID by some chance go, villain, it's unlikely he'd WANT to go back home. Why go to the one place he KNOWS there are people capable of stopping him after all?

Maybe I'm missing something, if I am, someone explain it to me because that threat made no sense at all and Gohan is smart enough to get that I think.

A great story here so far! Looking forward to reading more!

Piccolo, by fusing with Kami, is both a former God and a former Demon King.

It was hard for me to put my phone down and sleep instead of finish reading this story yesterday! Absolutely talented! Hope everything’s well

was that supposed to be an x-men cameo o.O professor Xavier and scott summers .

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I really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. Are you going to post the next chapter?

J'aime j'adore continue PLEASE,

I never understand why the new Hero, Gohan should explain anything to them. I actually started to hate the fact that in any fanfiction made story that the Justice League must immediately learn about him or her, their source of power etc.

It makes me feel like Gohan make himself a lapdog or too funeral, too trusting etc. This makes me think as if the writer has no any other way than copying other writers by doing the same? They let use J'onn use his mental skills, or force their life story out of the Main character!

They let the Main character open themselves, yet never Batman or any other heroes besides their name, and sometimes not even that. You say, for trust, but where is the trust than from the Justice League. They keep that information hanging over his or her head.

Where is the action where Batman must do his work to gather information than getting everything on a silver plate in front of him, huh! This part is the only shitting thing of the whole chapter!

Merci pour ton explication car sa's cela j'aurais dis qu'il était allé ssj2.

J'aime bien et pour tes remarques je suis d'accord surtout pour le fait que Gohan aurait dû continuer à s'entraîner un petit peu il aurait pu être encore ssj2 mais pas au dessus mais je pense que Gohan est plus fort que Superman mais le héros le plus fort de DC est Flash en second Superman, dans DBZ son Gohan est premier voir second, et physiquement de vu Superman est de peu plus balèzes mais cela ne veut rien dire.

I just re-read the first couple of chapters and there are some more things you got SO wrong! The explosion when he used Solar Flare would have had no effect on Gohan. Which means he would have been hurt by the blast. You're down playing his strength and making weaker than he was during Buu. I suggest that you learn more about DBZ before you botch another fanfic up.

Green Lantern always pisses me off in these fics. ALWAYS.

This is amazing I can’t wait for the next chapter please update soon thanks