"Oh, and don't underestimate the importance of body language!" Axel said, moving his hips and making a little seductive dance.

I almost died laughing at that part.

This is an amazing fic.

B'aw, I liked it! Great job :)

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Thank you.

aww, that's cute

And now I picture Roxas transforming from merman to human with Demyx (or Sora) and maybe Zexion or Terra trying to get him to the surface before drowns. Thank you for feeding my already crack-ridden mind that is constantly mixing Kingdom Hearts and classic Disney movies together for fanfiction purposes. I sort of had an idea of what was going down when I saw the title then read the summary. I instantly knew it was going to be something Little Mermaid related. I'm very happy I read this humorous story. You did well and gave Axel a very amusing role. Well Roxas got the perfect role for him as well, but now I'll only ever see Axel as a sea witch. XD

Great job. )

Aww, that was adorable!
Disney songs rock :D