Please update ! I like your story

I love how you're incorporating the movies into your story! please come back and finish it!

That was evil! You haven't updated in forever, and the most recent chap is a cliffhanger.
Regardless, what you do have written is excellent and I very much wish for you to pursue this story.

Loki giggles to much. Tonny can giggle its in his characcter, but Loki is more of a dark chuckle kind of guy. The last scene I think you should have wrote chuckles, or starts with a guet laught that gets lauger. Other than that it is a good story so far.

Update! Please I'm begging you! You must UPDATE!

Okay seriously this story is magnificent. You can't just stop it there! There's so much left to happen! Tony is in Asgard of all places! Who knows what he will get up to! ;-)

But seriously I loved this story. It's written amazingly well and all the characters are perfectly in character. Even the ever bratty Thor. The "before Midgard" Thor that really needed a few punches to the face lol. ;-)

I hope you come finish this wonderful story some day! I would definitely love to read more of your fantastic work! :-)

Maddy

﹏ left me hanging, thanks lol was greatest I read. Finish at 1:57am, night time, AZ. And that's how much I loved it.

Chapter not as long XD I read longer before lol

You actually are the cruelest thing ever. How could you possibly think it is okay to leave such a great amazing fantastic lovable addicting heart wrenching...(I could go on mind you)... Story unfinished? You haveeeee to keep going. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

Please update!
This is a great story -

please. Please. PLease. PLEase. PLEAse. PLEASe. PLEASE UPDATE!

Must have more

Uh oh... not good...
I really need more!

Mean...

No... just as things are going good...