There isn't a word in the dictionary for how awesome this is.

Hello :D! I haven't read it yet, I just thought I'd do this :D!

I really like your story, and also REALLY want you to write a fanfic of big macintosh and fluttershy, as long as you can. I would really appreciate it!

You never cease to amaze, can't wait to read the sequel.

It was so sweet to see Apple Bloom and Lezard finally get their time together.

WHY CAN'T I STOP READING YOUR STORYS ! ...i had just finished reading Inner Demons and i tought "hay why not go look at there (im not sure if you are a male or female) other works?" when i do this i see the name of this story... and long story short its 4:30 in the morning and i have been up for 2 days holding on to every word that has been in the last two storys. you have a direct line to my emotions and now i must go find this other story and read it to see what happend to Rarity! i hope you are happy!... i know i am, i must say that there is no way that could get better. i was amost at tears with the last chapter

love,
a very happy reader and fan

Haven't been on Fanfiction much recently, but I will be reading this story and the sequel. I can't believe that it's been so long. I remember when there were still only around 7 chapters in Inner Demons, and now it's gone on to over 30 with two sequels. I'll be getting to this story whenever I have time. This first chapter already is making me think this is going to be good.

Oh good grief. I’d say poor Applejack, but amongst the Six she’s probably got the greatest stamina, so poor Flim and Flam.

This is a hell of a twist to throw into the story midway through. Defilers of Granny Smiths well deserved rest.. oh they shall suffer and pay for this unholy affront.

And thus the story (or rather, chapter in a much bigger story) comes to an end with the long overdue reunion of Lezard and Apple Bloom. Very sweet.

As a fellow fan of Miss Rarity over all others, definitely will check out this Fragments story you’ve spoken of. And will await part III which seems to be building up in the background.

Exellent Sapphire, You're an artist with these stories!

I think that this was a great ending for this story and a even better opening for the next, through i will have to read "Inner Demons: Fragments of Truth" before i can even get to that story through, at least for now it looks like Apple Bloom will get a happy ending through for how long i don't know, with a someone after her for revenge, a group of ponies seeking the Sword of the Condemned, and a self proclaimed "Guardian of Equestria" after Twilight I don't think things will stay nice and happy for long.

P.S. I think i figured out what is going on with Octavia, through i will PM my guess, just in case i am right.

Great Job sapphire! This chapter is well put together with many with twist and turns.

Only one chapter left and it looks like things are getting even more interesting, with Apple Bloom leaving for Canterlot (and Lezard), Diamond Tiara being the reincarnation of a powerful dark witch, and now Granny Smith being raised from the dead, i can only wonder how this will all come together in the end.

It's 12:30 in the morning dammit! I need to sleep!

I can’t believe I’d been missing the subplot to this story with Diamond Tiara this whole time. Glad I am very much to have re-read through to see her descent into darkness. And whoo boy, if she hadn’t started before she certainly is on her way now. It’s like watching a repeat of the last story with a new generation caught in the mess.

And now we have further echoings of the past with Octavia and possibly others. Sounds like a lot of Fate is conspiring to relive the good ol’ days. Let’s hope Bloom and Tiara kick Destiny in the face.

Also can’t help but wonder about that mystery not-quite-Trixie stallion. A brother, or father perhaps?

Great chapter as always Sapphire and Thank you!