PLEASE KEEP THEM TOGETHER!

THEY NEED EACH OTHET JUST LIOE THEY NEED TO EAT AND BREATH!

please let jou meet seto face to face pl

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATEEEE!
This story is soooo good! Plz update soon! XD

This is a really good story wish you would finish it! :)

I would say to put them together again. Bc I just love both of them together.
But if I think about it, sometime in reality things dnt have a prefect ending. But Jou letter did bring tears to my eyes bc I understand that lonely feeling he is talking.
And that just breaks my heart.
The pains of being inlove hurts bc yu endure more things that yu wouldn't I yu werent I love.
In a way I feel that Seto deserves, how could he leave for a yr times. That is horrible, and Mokie was right Jou could have found someone else in the mean time.
:(
Poor Jou breaks my hurt.
Whatever yu decide to do I'll full support yu. Even tho I would love a happy ending, sometimes there isnt one.
Sighs. I think ima go crazy until I find out.

Also I love your beautiful writing style.
3

Omg I had tears in my eyes the whole time. I really do wish that u finish. It is a great story and REALLY can't wait to read the rest!

AHHHHH! You have to continue!

be together is my opinion

I'm sorry for skewing your statistics. But, at least I count as a new person and a new view.

Anyway, ready, set, review!

I had a section where I mentioned some things about Kaiba's emotional state, but I decided to cut it out and put it in the PM where I told you it would happen in the review. I lied to you.

Song ideas for the next chapter:

Under the assumption Kaiba can speak with Jou,
"Hands On Me" Vanessa Carlton
Reason: You'll have to hear it for yourself, I'm not sure I can explain better than the song can.

"Someday when our stories are told they'll tell of a love like this. When our descendents are all growing old 1,000 years they'll be singing."

Under the assumption Jou ignores Kaiba for at least a month, (which he should. If I were testing my Husband's story about staying in town, I'd see if he actually meant it),
"I never Told You", Colbie Cailat
Reason: Jou never told Kaiba how he felt. His actions and reactions to Kaiba's job and business trips shouldn't be qualified as a proper response in telling someone you're unhappy. He should feel guilty for having never told his husband how he felt.
Not to mention he's still in love with Kaiba, there will be moments where he will want him back, even if he never does go back.

"And now I miss everything about you. I can't believe it, I still want you."

Duet for an unhappy ending:
"Nothing Better" The Postal Service.
Reason: I don't forse this Kaiba being able to love anyone the same again, but maybe this Jou can't fix this relationship between them?

I still haven't found a duet for a happy ending, herm. I'll get to it. But, Heaven, by whoever you like best I personally prefer DJ Sammy, is a fantastic song for a sappy ending.

There are more options for songs, these were just my favorites at the moment. I also like them in combination together, which is why I limited them.

A good country song for this is I Want Us Back by Craig Morgan

OMG!
pls pls pls update this
i was waiting 4 ages

I'm not going to lie after the first chapter I wanted this to end as an anti romance and have them not get together. But after reading the second chapter I kind of do want them to get back together, except I don't want it to be a simple or easy task for Seto.

A good song for this idea could be the song 6, 8, 12 by Brian McKnight and perhaps use his other song Back at One for when Seto is trying to get back with Joey.

Just a few ideas I'm throwing out there. :)

UPDATE THIS STORY!

TOGETHER TOGETHER TOGETHER! DONT SPLIT THEM UP! but make seto grovel on his knees for a bit he deserves it with the way he treated katsuya. oh! and make some smut at the end! but it has to be a happy ending or I will cry!

keep up the good work :)