ITS RAINING OUTSIDE OKAY?!

RAINING.

I lovexpected this and the sequel!

IM NOT CRYING YOU'RE CRYING

Fuck yes. Amazing and beautiful. This gave me some much needed closure for the series and I adore it to bits.

This is the best post-Last Guardian fic I have read. I was able to sink into your words easily, the characters were simply perfect, especially that of Artemis. You helped me overcome my 'emotional-wreck' moments after a reread of the last book, and I thank you a million times over for that. Thank you for writing. I am at peace now that my brain can accept this highly plausible work as part of canon. And about Holly having Artemis' eye which was more than enough DNA. Why did I not think of that?!

The story clearly shows how much love both of you have for the series, going back to little references scattered throughout their adventures throughout the series. Artemis' growth in character was utterly believable and impactful: from a cold, selfish criminal mastermind to someone who steps up as a matyr to sacrifice his own life for others. The series, and this story, will remain a precious memory for a long time to come. Thank you! :')

Beautifully written

Wonderful and touching goodbye, and I love your explanation for the forehead kiss. Yes, it would have been all too easy for Holly to have washed it away in the end, eh?

Hi!

This was a great ending to the series! I was just musing after finishing the book earlier today that endings are very difficult. Mr Colfer's ending wasn't bad, but...I guess I grew quite attached to the characters over the course of the series so it was hard to let it go.

So I was pursuing some decent endings and I have to say that I loved this fic! It was so touching in places and well written (always a plus!) and I would say that if this had been a part of TLG, it would have fitted in seamlessly.

Thank you for the story and good luck in your future writing endeavours!
Suzuka

I personally loved the 'fours' joke the best. It's both mean and hilarious that none of them (well, mostly Mulch and Foaly) will let it go. Really liked this fic!

Awesome, awesome story. All elements in the right quantities!

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Wish that Eoin Colfer had used this ending instead

This is perfect and completely lives up to what you said you intended to do, as well as kinda fixing any minor things in the final book that bugged me. Well done does not begin to cover it.

This is perfect. I've just finished the book and this adds so much to the story. And it nicely soothes my craving for more Fowl.

This is a beautiful fanfiction

Thanks. This gave me the closure I needef for the ending.