It's nice to see Somone mop up the Croats command left behind. Great story and a happy ending. Best regards HG14

Wow, it's been a while since I read a StarFox story... Anyways, thank you for writing this one-shot about my favorite video game character of all time, Fox McCloud! I have looked at the other reviews and most of them said that the story was short. I really don't mind short one-shots because sometimes the short stories are the best! ...As long as their not TOO short... And yes, I did have a Merry Christmas. Hope you did!

this is good for a one-shot but if you plan on macking it anything more than that tack it slower and don't give it all away. thats about it. once again not bad for a one-shot.

Even though it was really short, I really liked it. Straight and to the point, yet still enjoyable.

Despite the length, the one-shot was great.

For such things, I only care about the heart-warming feel of it and of course, this gave that bit of feeling to it which is nice. Abrupt as it is as mentioned by others which I also agree, it didn't lack details. The pace is fast but that's understandable considering its a oneshot, hell I think oneshots are usually fast paced now that I think about it. xD

Late but I'll say it anyway! To me, as long as December's still up and running;
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays.

Considering it's length, I think this was a good little Christmas one-shot. Happy ending, touch of romance, and all of it right at Christmas nonetheless. To be honest the only things I'd complain about can be found in Emile's review below mine. It does seem rather abrupt and sudden to have Krystal just up and say "I'm sorry" and then everything be fixed and back to normal...but then again, in order to fix those wounds you'd probably have to dedicate thousands of words of text to it, so I understand.

Anywho, great one-shot, just a little sudden with some parts. Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays!

Love it. Fox and Krystal back together again, and on Christmas. I liked that the story was short and sweet. Nice job.
-general whitefur

Aw what a sweet story. Fox and krystal are cute together. I like the christmas theme to it as well.

it was pretty good. but i was hopeing it to be a bit longer

Okay, so it wasn't bad, I did like it, kudos on the writing and all. But one thing bugged me, really, well badly.

Krystal's just sudden lovey kissey stuff, just seems, well sudden and abrupt. I expected some discussion about why she had left Star Wolf, aside from they were jerks, and all that. If I remember right from Command, Krystal had become kinda of a hardened Badass, glad to be hurting Fox, and now here she is suddenly sorry?

Meh, maybe I'm mixing my endings up, anyway, great story aside from that little sudden bit. I know its a one shot and all, but still...

I'm Rambling...ha

Peace,

-Emile

Very awesome Fox-Krystal Christmas themed one shot. :) Excellent work my friend.

Aww this was so cute .. I loved this little one-shot. Great job. :D

OHMYGAWD this was the BEST oneshot I have ever read!

Hey there! Can't wait to see another fanfic from you. :)