So you not only decided to NERF everything about naruto but now you also decided to nerf what was in the original series as well with shadow clones... how much ridiculousness you want feed this lame story?. You even started making up some shit about the sharingan. This is a failure.

My theory for narutos dullness towards women is he was traumatized by watching jaraiya be beaten so often so he decided to hide it with all his willpower

I'd love to see an update!

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just i quick input , naruto didnt believe in fate so i woud like to know why you put that in there. "
unknown asked in a calm curious voice"

That would be forty days of doing the same thing. With Narutos healing factor his brain would all but unaffected. He might get a headache at worst also he never fainted afterwards in canon. That was from using Kuramas chakra

too bad you stopped updating this :(

pls update

By restricting the amount of clones he can dispell at once, you have failed to address the idea that naruto can create thousands of clones, but only dispell the almost max amount he can handle every hour or so. Please remove this loophole unless you purposely want to mislead everyone to think that he is going to use that loophole.
Plus, where is the action? You may have also forgotten that Naruto is a Chakra wielding shinobi that has all of his physical attributes way past normal human levels. He should be able to defeat Takashi (spell?). Obviously not the headmaster. You are limiting the action also. It looks like filler.
Though good story overall.

More please

Please update soon.

Your excuses against the clone method are stupid! While receiving memories from hundreds at once is a bit much, you have to realize that they're all doing a rather simple task and shouldn't the sharingan help in that regard? Seeing chakra makes it much easier to manipulate it. Also, "kinda cheating" they're ninja not samurai, there is no cheating!

Awesome story I really hope it's going to continue you are an amazing writer keep it up

I hope you're not dead! I really like your crossovers, and hope you are going to continue them! Keep up the good work!

This is beyond entertaining. Gotta admit though, if I were in Naruto's position, I'd probably go for Kaede and Chizuru, probably ignore the rest as far as possible romance is concerned. But that's me, I'm not him, and I'm not writing this story, so... meh. I do, however, look forward to a continuation.