Reviews for Paradise
klavscaroline chapter 20 . 4/21/2019
loved the concept of this story and the way you've written it!
JustNo chapter 20 . 5/26/2018
I have read many of your stories of the past weeks and I loved them. This one however is my least favorite, I dare even say that I did not like it. I like Rebekah but not in this story and she did not deserve forgiveness, she did not deserve to live either! Caroline should have killed her on the fool moon and triggered her werewolf curse to become the first hybrid. Also, Klaroline are a bit cheesy in this story and there are repetitions in there dialogues... One thing is sure, you got better with time as a writer, I loved your recent stories like Avowal...
saraaaa chapter 19 . 10/25/2016
had to re read was amazing
saraaaa chapter 20 . 11/20/2015
wow i love all the role reversal its so interesting and love how caroline has 3 sisters and a half bro in this fic, deserves a million likes and reviews i loved it read it all in one day xx
Ms.KlarolineMikaelson chapter 20 . 4/17/2015
Great story! Very unique. I like how you swaped characters and their stories around, it worked pretty well!
RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy chapter 20 . 2/25/2015
Loved this story. It was interesting. I just didn't like a few small things.

I didn't like how we didn't get to see what everyone else was doing 2 years later. I would have liked seeing what Bekah did during those years. Maybe she find a boyfriend and changed. I also would have liked seeing Kat. She hurt a lot also and went through lots of jealousy and pain herself.

I did like that Tyler and his dad lived together to bond. That was sweet.

I like how Liz gave her blood to Bekah and was all motherly and sweet to her. I liked that Bekah walked away sadly and didn't kill her or Caroline.

I didn't like that there wasn't a Bekah and a Kol scene. I Mean she was in love with him for who knows how long. She was very jealous of Bonnie and hated her, hated her relationship she had with Kol. I was shocked that she attacked Caroline more and treated her worst. I was surprised she never attacked Bonnie or that they didn't fight more. I would have liked a scene with the two siblings though. Starting out with them shouting at each other because she is jealous and maybe she hurt Bonnie or something. Then I would have liked them to hug it out, for Bekah to cry and Kol to feel awful because he didn't love her back. He couldn't. He loved Bonnie. But Kol never seemed to comment on his sisters feelings for him. Not even when he heard Bonnie and Bekah talking at the grill which he was at. Thats one thing that I didn't like and had hoped for.

But I did love your story. It was very different from the others.

I liked that Kol admitted he loved Bonnie and she didn't say it back, hurting him. Then he ran off and her and Klaus ran after him and she had her talk with Kol in another country. That was a good scene.

I liked that Caroline turned out to be Tylers half sister. That was different! I felt awful for him though. The poor guy was in love with her:(

I would have liked to read a sister/brother bonding with the 4 girls and Tyler though.

I also wish that Henrik was in your stories more often! Whether he is a teenager/adult or a kid. Whether they are all vampires or human.
RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
Again I love how your stories are all so different! I guessed that Bonnie was going to be one of the 'Forbes sisters' and I kept on wondering where she was. Thought she would at least be their best friend. But I like all the sisters you chose. Lexi is a new one and she is a sister and close with Kat! I like that. I also love Bonnie in this. She already knew the Originals and she has been dating Kol for years and they love each other! I love how she is crazy evil in this and how she helps out Kol. lol.

I also love how Bekah seems to be in love with Kol and jealous. Though I like her as Caroline and Bonnie's best friend instead like most of your other stories...BUT again your stories are all so different. She can't always be their best friend. Now she is jealous and in love with Kol and hates her favorite brothers girls. I love that.

I like how Kat is in love with Damon, but he loves Elena and shes always so jealous and hurting. Stefan was evil and he and her teamed up! Interesting plot.

I also like how Care had a bad heart.
kickassfu chapter 20 . 9/1/2014
I loved this fic, as always great job! You're too talented, I'm jealous hahaha
Sofia Linnae chapter 20 . 7/11/2014
Very creative and different from all the others that I read so far, congratulations!
I love your writing and the way you describe all the scenes is wonderful.
Keep up with the amazing work :)
strawberrylover1 chapter 20 . 4/20/2014
klaroline and kennett are so perfect...
ReHaM AdEl chapter 20 . 4/15/2014
YOU ARE AMAZING WRITTER I LOVE THIS STORY AND I CAN'T STOP READING IT :* :*
Angels-heart1 chapter 20 . 2/16/2014
Great story, loved it.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/6/2013
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TOKlarolineTVD chapter 20 . 10/16/2013
LOVED THIS STORY! YOU'RE A FANTASTIC WRITER, WITH A GREAT IMAGINATION. :)
aKqR-KPZTQ chapter 20 . 9/8/2013
This was so amazing, Like I have no words. I reviewed every chapter I guess you could take that as to how much I loved it!
This is seriously wow so incredibly amazing, awesome, just perfect.
I loved this dark side of Caroline so much, I loved their relationship so much. (I could go on and on about the things that I loved about them, so, I'll just address those.)
I loved Kennett, they are always oh so unique! lol
I hated Rebekah so much but at some point I understood her, she was just messed up and didn't know how to cope with the fact that they weren't just the three of them anymore.
Actually, I don't know why nobody uses this side of Stefan, I think is very interesting, I enjoyed it very much, I like his relationship with Katherine, I mean at first I hated them because their conspiracy to break Delena apart but then well that happened. XP
Tyler and Caroline as brother and sister is really something I wasn't expecting, I won't lie and say that I love him 'cause, well I really don't but I actually didn't hate and wish for his death ever so often in here, let's say he wasn't as annoying as always ;)
Lexi and Elijah is something never ever have I think about but it was good, they were cute actually!
I'm a Delena shipper so you know, I enjoyed that very much as well :)
Esther... ugh I hated her, thank goodness that after all she wasn't that hard to take down! that was good.
Bill, coward.
Carol, bit slutty.
Alaric, urgh such a pain in the ass.
Liz, as always unique, quite funny. XD
There's no much to tell, I've ramble a lot, LOL
Just wanted to thank you for such an amazing story and congratulate you for the same reason, you're one of my favorites authors in this site, such a talented woman! I hope you keep on the amazing job. my best wishes, lots of love! (: xx
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