I never knew they made this much drama about Tori. Im glad you wrote this to argue back what people are saying about her.

This is great. As much as I wouldn't mind seeing Kotone pick up a deck, I like her the way she is. I hate the notion of how a girl *must* be a badass in order to be a good character.

Just AAAW. It's so nice to read about these two bonding rather than fighting. I simply love your characterization for both. Especially Kotori. It is pretty sad she gets so much hate.

But yes, lovely story.

Aww, I'm really glad to see SOMEONE else finally put down what I feel about Kotori into words! I mean seriously, I love Kotori for who she is too, even though I dearly wish for her to be more badass in the show (hey, it could still happen). But I think sometimes people forget the fact that it's the ones who've been there all along that can make the biggest impact in the long run, even if it's not very visible. I think this applies to not only ZEXAL but IRL too.

Nice perspective , even if the views on duels exploted here are somewhat scary .
Well Done!

Wow... Sad, yet beautiful.
I think Cathy and Kotori could be good friend, and stop fighting for Yuma xD
Keep the good work!