Awesome! Favorite one so far. I hope you continue writing

Do you know, I often come back and read this Fanfiction? It's probably one of the best things I have read. I hope you choose to write a book one day 3

You are not short of talent, a greater writer than I could ever hope to be, but where is the care-free, confrontational Dastan we know? The romantic tension between the Alamutian princess and the prince of Persia that would have made this story golden?

No disrespect meant, but all you see to be putting forward is how weak and frailed Dastan has become after the alternation of time. I see no fault in giving a character a flaw, after all, who knew what Dastan thought or felt rather than himself? No one. A point that would make the flaw you chose plausible, given that it did not undermine the strong character Dastan had successfully projected himself as to his brothers and the Persian army, because war affairs were trifling whether the fallen were guilty or innocent, and as someone who initiated the battle, I feel you have constructed a different Dastan altogether in this story.

You did a wonderful job with this story.

This has got to be the best post Prince of Persia fanfiction that I have had the pleasure of reading! The plotline was excellent, your writing style impeccable, it was truely a fantastic read. Definitely worth my time to read. Thank you for writing such a great story!

wow...this was a really a fantastic story

You are such an amazing writer and I pray you continue to have success in life.

God bless

I /LOVED/ this story! It was AMAZING! The characters were so realistic and you did a great job keeping them true to their voices. I really enjoyed reading this! I couldn't walk away from it until I had finished!

Amazing story. Really it is the best of all the after movie stories i read.
Greatly your hard work.
Please write more, either new or its sequel.
Please...please...please

Amazing story. Really it is the best of all the after movie stories i read.
Greatly your hard work.
Please write more, either new or its sequel.
Please...please...please..

Awesome. It worth a sequel and we are waiting for it.

Amazing! This was beautifully written. There's definitely potential for a sequel. Maybe his return to Alamut and his wedding to Tamina? Congratulations on writing such a beautiful continuation for the movie! I hope you find the time and inspiration to continue this story!

Fantastic story!

Simply great...I wanted something at the end of the movie...no man no matter how great he is can come out that ordeal unscathed... Thanx for satisfying my hunger for more of prince dastan a little bit.

This story was amazing! Utterly brilliant! I cannot imagine a better way to have continued the movie. I loved the interaction between the brothers and Dastan, and Bis. I really loved the battle with the Hassenssens, and that the sandglass showed each of them the memories of the previous timeline! Truely a great story!
God Bless,
SW

we are early waiting for yours next chapters . please update soon. anyway this whole sequel is wonderful & awesome. YOU ARE VERY TALENTED. OUR WHOLE GROUP IS FAN OF YOUR STORY'S. SO WE ARE BEGGING U TO START A NEW STORY OF ROMANCE WITH HURT COMFORT B/W DASTAN TAMINA