'Ebat' kopat''? Seriously? Может, лучше "етить колотить" или просто сильное "ебааать"? Anyway, I laughed xD

Omg loved it so much. And I'm glad you went there with the deaths. 2nd was unexpected but still glad.

Only wish is that it'd been longer. I never want great fics to end

Awwwww such a great story!
Believe me or not, a few hours before I founded this story, I was thinking about THIS EXACT IDEA. About Loki splitting in two, a good and a evil him. And I thought about how great a story like that would be, and what would happen in it. And then I founded this story, and WHAT DID I SEE, it was EXACTLY WHAT I WANTED! Really, Fate is amazing some times. Must be the Norns messing with me XD
I read it all in one go, I loved it!

Super awesome

Wow. Just wow. I LOVE this story, everything about it is just superb! And I love this melancholical tone towards the end! Define one of my absolute favourite stories here on FF. :-)

okay... no idea why you like Natasha. She's a plumbing f**king prick. On the roster she's the reject that no one ever picks.
LOL. Just kidding. Your story is really good, so far, and im a big fan of your work. but I wish Clint lived... I HATE Natasha!
(And yes, I borrowed from Smosh's Smash Rap. It's really good. Smosh is amazing! You should check 'em out.)

The was beautifully written. I loved it.

Such a good story. One question, HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH SUCH TWISTED PUNISHMENTS

YOu... you did NOT just do that!

Admit I was sad when the two halves were merged and I agree that Loki will never be able to forget that Thor hates half of him plus I think Thor is being stupid that he and Loki can rebuild their brotherly relationship if he intends to maintain a relationship with those on Midgard. If Thor wants Jane as a permanent part of his life, ie a wife, then he cannot have a relationship with Loki. It is Jane and the remaining Avengers or Loki, it is no fair to either to maintain a relationship with both.

interesting

You know, Loki could have gone one step further with this - rigged it the opposite of what he told them. So when Natatsha pressed the button at Clint's urging, she killed herself. Leaving a broken, guilt ridden Clint who had basically talked her into doing it... Even sicker, I think. And less likely to fuel rage/revenge.

Well, that could have gone better for everyone. The Story itself, however, brilliant. I love this Fandom, it's so much fun.

I know this is complete, but I have to call foul on mind control for Cap. He is immune to it, and that's official.

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. The plot of this was magnificently crafted, there were so many feels being broken. I love the idea of the two sides of Loki - they were both beautifully written and believable. Also how you wrote true Loki, so wonderfully in character. I thoroughly enjoye this fic, I enjoy pretty much all your fics. Such an original storyline and an amazing way to show Loki's emotions without making him OOC which is something to be proud of. Really Loki should have been taking pointers from you here in the first place. Though I do hate you for killing Darcy. Just so you know and lol Stark, always with the funniest commentary. I really love this fic!