it was a beautiful story but a sad one

Shes 15? Whole lotta nope. I always hate how young the characters in the original story are. They are children.

Hi, I like your story, it's interesting enough. That's the reason I read on till now even though there are some things I really don't like. Like the relationship between Damon and Jacqueline. I...really don't like it. I think I managed to push on till now because she never gave in to his bullshit before but, well. I mean, that is an abusive relationship. That is exactly how things get bad between paople, when one gives in every time the other does something bad just because they apologise. Again and again and /again/. And the people around her don't support her decision to stay away, or at least teach him a lesson, but instead encourage her to forgive him and get back in said abusive relationship. As if it's the right thing to do. As if what Damon does is normal and thus of course he should be forgiven and she is the one being unreasonable. And I know there are supernatural elements at play but I just cannot read on anymore. Sorry, it's nothing against the story itself and I am sure you have your reasons to make their relationship this way (I hope) but I still cannot bear it anymore. Sorry about my rant but it was a pent up situation. Hope I didn't offend you. Thanks for the good read till now.

ok so she forgot about uninportant event but remembers the titles of each episode which ic more minor than said events?

I loved this story I couldn't stop reading it. Even though I could tell English isn't ur first language it still reads fairly well and I love your main character so much she grows as a person and I was so sad to see her go. I can't wait to see how the sequel goes. Thanks for writing.

uh oh

Such a great story you wrote. It is true that she is quite young, but she has sex when she is 16, so it is not so bad, and she is so mature of character. Besides I remember clearly that Elena was 17 and all the other girls were mostly underage when the series begun. So, I can overlook the age issue. All in all, fantastic. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel

I honestly don’t know if I wanna read this... the only prospect that is keeping me from wanting to continue is HER AGE! And knowing there is going to be sex in here. She is 14-15, going to sleep with someone who is 25 (physically)... that is statutory rape. Consensual or not.. I do NOT condone underage sex and do not like reading it. One thing I HATED about TVD and some of these fanfics.. making the OCs so damn young! And nothing but underage sex, sex, SEX!
I’m sure this is a great story. I can tell from the review list and favs and follows but I can’t get past the AGE...

AAAAAWWWWWWWWW

OOOOOOOHHHHHH NOOOOOO I HOPE HE FORGIVES HERRRR

AAAAAAGGGGHHHHHHHHHH

HOLY CRAP! I CANT BELIEVE SHE DID THAT

OMGGGGGGGGG SHE FAKED HIM OUT SO HARD IM DYINGGGGGG

DAMON IS SO WORRIED ABOUT HER I CANT

THESE TWO OMGGGG