OH MY GOD! You did it again! I am in awe of such awesomeness! That was just amazing, and so sweet! I'm gonna cry. But that might just be from lack of sleep... either way, it was still very sweet and touching! Please, please, please continue my dear, awesome friend!

SO CUTE SO KAWAII
Why am I always talking in squigglies?

Awww! So cute! Please update soon.

A longer chapter, Yay! but it leaves me craving more! You must update soon, or i just might go crazy! lol;P

Thi is great! I started tearing up when Toni didn't remember Lovino! It's so angsty! I love it! Keep up the great work! Btw your a great poet!

WAHH!

Good chapter. As usual, your imagery is quite good, and the journal entry is great.

This is so good and this is the only the first two chapters. I hipe you write a while lot more because this is probably the best Spamano fanfiction I have ever read!

Must read more! prease update, really really soon!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DAMN YOU! That's HORRIBLE! Well, it's really really awesome but HORRIBLE! HOW COULD SPAIN FORGET LOVI? It was really well written and you could totally tell Lovi's feelings. AWESOME just took on a knew meaning

Oooooo! That was really good! I'm curious!

The poem at the end was beautiful, as was your descripton of Spain. I felt like I could actually smell Spain from across my laptop. I am spellbound by the beauty of this short fic; really, I am. My only piece of ConCrit is the fic's short length: you could of gone a bit further with this, but you just dropped at the end. Regardless, ending with a piece of his journal was a nice touch. Good job, overall!

Xx Write on, keep calm, and carry on! The Legend of Derpy, Proud Member of Critics United xX

That's sad! But I just know that Spain's gonna come back, even if he was dead. He'd come back to haunt him