Wow, this was really very haunting and effective. Chilling emotions. It's great to see a weakend Bella at the hands of Voldemort - it really provided a great image - and I also loved how little he cared for her. Unrequited Bellamort is the only kind of Bellamort. ;) Good job!

You really got Bella to a T here. Really good, keep writing

Very interesting. I really like Voldemort's perplexed reaction to the fact that someone didn't fear death.

I think there is a typo in the summary: “Returning from failing to kill an Auor” Auror?

Aw, poor Bella...

Omg, Caitlin, I love this. I could actually feel Bellatrix's anguish at being separated from Voldemort. It's horrible, and I can really imagine it - revering someone so much that the greatest punishment they can imagine is separation. My, that IS cruel! But then again, it's Voldemort, and she failed him, and she needs to be punished...

The ending especially was amazing, and I just loved the way you portrayed the relation between them.

Gosh, Caitlin, I love you D this was just wonderful. I LOVE the way you depicted the depth and extent of Bella's devotion, that makes her willing to die rather than to be a disappointment for her master. The Dark Lord's puzzlement at the realization was brilliantly handled, too ) and it was wonderfully described, as usual. You're brilliant! D

An interesting look at Bella. Well done!

Amazing job! I feel sorry for Bellatrix...