So, his parents are alive, he is given the Kyuubi and his dad hates him for being what his wife was previously? Why not explain why up front? Cliche and lack of imagination. I hope this improves quickly, not sure why people love writing child abuse stories regardless of how Naruto grows powerful later. Is that the catalyst for success a terrible beginning? Doesn't work too well in our world.

DB

Once again your story has turned into nothing but a "Hurr hurr look how angsty i can make it! I'm known for angsty fanfics hurrrrr" This was recommended for whatever reason so i gave it a chance. never again with you.

I skimmed through this and I'm honestly surprised by the enthusiasm shown to this fic.

The entire plot is a dark maze navigated with no clarity, the plot twists entirely relying on nonsensical decisions from characters and brainwashing of course, because that's so original and convenient.

The characters themselves are all detestable. All liars, manipulative, cruel, selfish, never showing once any kind of heroic traits. They are never courageous, never moral, never truthful. They are so dark they aren't even humans. And some are straight OCs with a name tag on them for an illusion that does not hold.

I cannot recommend that for anyone. You'll see plenty of other reviews praising this but I cannot understand why.

... This was easily the BEST fanfiction I have ever read.
You displayed thoughts clearly and left enough hints for us to try to piece stuff together.
Even then, you explained it so people (like me), who didn't get stuff understood.
You even made all the scenes feel natural and you had the characters' tendencies down to a tee.

I can't wait to read the rest of your works!

how the hell do people like this fucking shit? naruto is a little bitch, he get betrayed and he keep fucking forgiving them. you must be mentally retarded to like this shit. the fucking writer must dumb as fuck to write this and must mentally retarded as well.

Why is Naruto such a bitch? Constantly betrayed and still trying to protect those that betrayed him. Why is ankos betrayal never addressed?

Mentally retarded Naruto

amazing story wish more like this existed

What a colossal piece of trash. You vent your angst to this fic because you watched your mother fuck the guy who fucked your girlfriend. Too bad, go kill yourself you shrimp dicked fag

loved it. one of the best Naruto fics I've read. I think you managed to get that underneath the underneath sort of thinking. G

dear writer please make more chapters

The only explanation I could really think of is that Kushina and Minato are under some nasty genjutsu but I still find that unlikely. After all the Sandaime and Jiraiya are aware of the reason of Naruto's abandonment. They hate Naruto for being a jinchuriki even though Kushina was one herself. Maybe some sort of prophecy from the toad summons? But then Jiraiya wouldn't have offered Naruto the toad contract. Ugh, this is hurting my head.

Taru, Teru, Tiru, Tara, Tuna, Tiara, and Tora. XD. This is hilarious. I choked on my water and nearly spit it in front of the kid sitting in front of me in class. Everyone was staring at me like I was crazy as I was laughing/choking on water while having a smile on my face.

Man, this chapter was a shit show. Everything is so screwed up on so many levels. Someone scheming against someone, while another person plots, along with another scheming in the dark. So much crap it's getting a little confusing. But I love it.

Honestly, right at this moment, I hate your version of Minato, or at least I hate the suffering he is putting Naruto through. Minato is taking away so many people from Naruto. His family when he was "disowned", Itachi now that he is on this undercover mission, and even his relationship with Anko will be jeopardized because of the seduction mission Anko is on. Don't get me wrong, I love this story, I just had to get that off my chest.