Really cool to see you return to this project! I really love this series and you really emulate Cofler's style really well. Really like thunderbird and I hope I can see more of it in the future

This is masterful. Please consider dropping the next chapter sooner rather than later, this is a great read and i’m highly enjoying it.

You know... a lil bit of psycho-drama does wonders for the soul. I can't wait to see how this situation turns around.
Keep writing, your story is glamorous!

it has been half a year. i have consumed everything i could find on nh, and i still want more. no pressure though.

- an improper, rude and apologetic fan

Honestly breathtaking. This is criminally underrated for its quality. There's such clear talent at work in crafting descriptions and plots - original characters, too - that I am hard-pressed to believe my eyes when I see less than a thousand followers. I managed to finish the whole fifteen chapters in one sitting of extended free time and already crave more.

Seriously, astounding work you've done here. I applaud the dedication over the years as well, especially if you continue to post through the insanity that has been 2020. I plan on getting a hold of my account credentials to give this story the follow/favorite it deserves, preferably at a time other than 3:22 AM. Here's to hoping that there's a future for this tale.

Stay healthy out there.

Honestly I wonder how Artemis's mind will end up at the end of this

Please continue this story. The fact you updated it so recently is good! It is well-written, with a great plot, and it seems (to me, but you can't always trust my opinions) that you are representing the characters and how they would react with each other perfectly. Please continue this, it is very good! Have a nice day! :)

Can't wait for the next chapter! It's really cool so far! Good job! :)

I didn't even see this was updated. i remember reading it, or at least the earlier chapters, years ago, soon after i finished off the book series. Seeing how much, but at the same time, how little, progress has been made in that time. . . it's left mixed feelings. On the one hand, I absolutely adore what you have here. The details really stand out, bring the plot together. Written very well, something I applaud you for.

Yet on the other hand, the snails pace of the updates to keep a readers momentum going along, sometimes years between updates. . . ow. That's the only real fault I can find in the fic so far, but, well, it's pretty big.

Still, all things considered, this is a lovely story you're threading together. I do look forward to seeing where it's going, but I just can't get my hopes up considering time between updates.

Just started this. Definitely seems interesting. Very well written and reminiscent of Colfer. It reads like it could be a book in the series from the little I have read so far.

Woah!
Ive been feeling a bit nastoglic for AF recently and decided to go searching for fanfics. I stumbled upon your work and am so glad I did! This story is very well written and your care and love for the characters and the source material as well as the story you're telling really shines through. I'm eager to see what happens next and am super glad I stumbled upon this. Thank you for not giving up on this story!

Thank you for what may be the best chapter yet. Your characterisiation was especially convincing and your style improves with each chapter. This one was both tautly written and insightful, with the pace and attention-holding detail of a Colfer original.

Please may I request that you manage to update sooner, especially as once the film comes out I suspect this site may be flooded with second-rate fics and quality work, such as yours, will be swamped and barely noticed. Besides I can't bear to wait!

Haha! I'm really enjoying this banter. This chapter was funny. It's been so long since I've read it that it feels practically new, and I don't remember it being this strongly A/H so early on, which was a nice surprise. You write well.

Hey. Don't know if you remember me ;), but, I just wanted to say I'm glad to see you've continued this fic without a beta even after all these years. I also recently noticed The Fowl Twins on a shelf in the bookstore I was working at and reminded me of you and all our friends over on that AF forum, which got us talking on the Facebook chat again after a couple years' radio silence.

Anyway, I'll leave a real review on this as soon as I have a chance to look it over; it's been so long I don't remember any of it. I've also been rewatching FMA after like 6 years and now I'm kind of sad because I don't even remember how I intended to finish my FMA fic. xD

Happy to see this! And for the notice of more Fowl outside of Fan fiction!