Reviews for The Martyr |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You can't just give such powers to Leia and leave it there! There's a plot to be developed! Perhaps Leia will tap into the dark side instead of Luke? I always thought her personality being more like Anakin's, she could make a powerful Sith. Just one recommendation. Next time have the fics betaed by someone so there are not grammatical errors. One can predict what you tried to say but makes the reading annoying. So please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude! You can't leave it there! What happened next?! Great story! Totally hoping for more! |
![]() ![]() *Your. Otherwise very good. :) |
![]() ![]() Wrong your/you're. Your is possessive. You're means you are. So you've said "You are rebellion will be crushed", approximantely. Paperclipgail1728 |
![]() ![]() I always felt Leia was an underused character. Love what you did here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was pretty good if you don't include your continuous use of "you're" where "your" should have been used. "You're" is a contraction of "You are." |
![]() ![]() ![]() such an awesome idea! i love the thought that leia would be able to make a fool of the emperor without any training :D |
![]() ![]() Cool story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really really good |
![]() ![]() Very interesting idea and great story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very very GOOD |
![]() ![]() Great job. |