| Reviews for The Martyr |
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soyunax chapter 1 . 3/23/2016 You can't just give such powers to Leia and leave it there! There's a plot to be developed! Perhaps Leia will tap into the dark side instead of Luke? I always thought her personality being more like Anakin's, she could make a powerful Sith. Just one recommendation. Next time have the fics betaed by someone so there are not grammatical errors. One can predict what you tried to say but makes the reading annoying. So please update! |
VeronicaD13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2016 Dude! You can't leave it there! What happened next?! Great story! Totally hoping for more! |
shel chapter 1 . 5/6/2015 *Your. Otherwise very good. :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2013 Wrong your/you're. Your is possessive. You're means you are. So you've said "You are rebellion will be crushed", approximantely. Paperclipgail1728 |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2013 I always felt Leia was an underused character. Love what you did here. |
shieldmaiden19 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013 This was pretty good if you don't include your continuous use of "you're" where "your" should have been used. "You're" is a contraction of "You are." |
Padfootkicksbutt chapter 1 . 10/6/2012 such an awesome idea! i love the thought that leia would be able to make a fool of the emperor without any training :D |
A chapter 1 . 10/2/2012 Cool story. |
Firefly Alchemist chapter 1 . 8/27/2012 That was really really good |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012 Very interesting idea and great story :) |
ccp chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 I like it |
ILDV chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 Very very GOOD |
Anon chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 Great job. |