Reviews for The Martyr
soyunax chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
You can't just give such powers to Leia and leave it there! There's a plot to be developed! Perhaps Leia will tap into the dark side instead of Luke? I always thought her personality being more like Anakin's, she could make a powerful Sith.
Just one recommendation. Next time have the fics betaed by someone so there are not grammatical errors. One can predict what you tried to say but makes the reading annoying.
So please update!
VeronicaD13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Dude! You can't leave it there! What happened next?!

Great story! Totally hoping for more!
shel chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
*Your. Otherwise very good. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Wrong your/you're. Your is possessive. You're means you are. So you've said "You are rebellion will be crushed", approximantely.

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Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
I always felt Leia was an underused character. Love what you did here.
shieldmaiden19 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
This was pretty good if you don't include your continuous use of "you're" where "your" should have been used. "You're" is a contraction of "You are."
Padfootkicksbutt chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
such an awesome idea! i love the thought that leia would be able to make a fool of the emperor without any training :D
A chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Cool story.
Firefly Alchemist chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
That was really really good
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Very interesting idea and great story :)
ccp chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I like it
ILDV chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Very very GOOD
Anon chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Great job.