Nice story! Thanks for posting it.

There are a few plot such how was Jenny there? and a Dalek ship?

awww... want more.

How are we ever gonna get him down for his nap, now that you told him Christmas is coming!

Best line ever!

Why don't things ever go smooth? For once? LOL

that was amazing! i love how theyre all in character, like how Mal is being all snappy and grunty, and the Doctor is happy-go-lucky smiles everywhere. i LOVE how River and Sexy are getting along! brilliant!

Oh my god. This is amazing! You're a really good writer!

Pretty Good

Oh my lord! There needs to be a sequel to this. *goes to look* Oh no! Why isn't there. There is so much more that can be done! I love this and I love that you brought Jenny back. I hope they eventually choose to do that on the Series. I'll go read the lovely Sherlock/Doctor/Serenity fic you got up there and just will have to be satisfyed with that.

I like how you wrote the Tardis' voice! I've never seen it done that way before!

I like this chapter. River's little panicked speech there when she wants to get Simon out reminded me of "Two by two, hands of blue." Really well thought out.

Two of the greatest shows in the world! And this looks like one of the better ones!

I'm hooked! I want to find out what happens next. Loving all the characters and their interactions.

Having Jenny join this crazy crew sure brightened things up a bit, and also showed the paternal side of the Doctor.

Hey.. just saw you are left with three reviews... Mumpitz! To put it in German. Meaning Bullshit or something like that. i love the story. Got the characters right on! They're funny. The story is funny. Actually it's... sexy!
Keep on writing...