OMGosh, that funny! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! priceless! "Smiling Babies!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! freaking hilarious! too funny!

I couldn't stop laughing from the beginning of this until the last! And great job allowing everyone to imagine their own OTP! (AschLuke babies... *nosebleed*)

TTwTT smiling babies lol

"You're just a pedophile!" Natalia declared.

Guy severely twitched this time. "A pedo-"

"Yeah, that's right," Anise looked at the blonde disapprovingly, laying Tokunaga on the ground in front of her. "You're an old man!"

Guy popped a vein. "Old man...?"

Tear, listening to the conversation with a heavy blush, kept quiet. Does this mean... that I'm a pedophile too?

LOL. :D This was the best part! Hehehaha. n_n

Wow...he's an even better manipulator than Jade. Luke probably broke all their brains in a single instant with that final comment. Hilarious.

Funny

Haha, funny stuff. But just one thing... update your other stories! Or at least make a new akatsuki one. I love your writing style! Its hilarious so pleeeease update more! Great story by the way;)

Awesome chapter, You should continue this! I really would like to see more of this, it was awesomely funny! good job :)

That was one of the best oneshots ive read in a I couldnt stop laughing lukes antics are just hilarious

*tries to hold in a squeal* Luke's so adorable! 3
It was amazing to imagine this, -not to mention very cute- and Asch and Luke's interaction was funny, especially since Luke was a ninja I love reading fan fics where Luke isn't just played off as a moron, but as someone who has a lot more going on that just whats on the surface (If that didn't make sense, oops?)

Guy the pedo...xDD

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this, great job