Aww I love this story so much! YEEE THEY LOVED EACH OTHER THE WHOLE TIME! I loved how you didn't add just Miku's side if the story but the brown haired boy's as well! And they all tie in perfectly together! The dialogue and especially the character's thoughts and feelings were well written too! Gah this is definitely one of my favorite stories! Awesome job!

OMG! I was tearing up when I was reading this.. I hope that guy likes Miku back. And coincidentally I was hearing Karakuri Pierrot LenxMiku version..
And yup. I thought this was a one-shot. You can read mind? LOL

This a a great ending 3 I don't think i could have done something like that!

KYAAA! I TOTALLY JUST FANGIRL SCREAMED! I LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE HOW THE MOVIE WAS KAKAKURI PIERROT! and do you happen to know who the guy vocaloid in the IA version is? im gonna be writing a vocaloid story soon and i need to know!

also who is the brown haired boy? im kinda assuming that he is an OC but if not please tell me who! he and miku are SOOO cute togethrr!

i also forgot to mention this but i love how miku turned down kaito in chapter 1! i was laughing crazy-hard! (even tho i LOVELOVELOVE kaitoxmiku)

i loved how you did both povs! and i ADORE karakuri pierrot! this is SUPER good and i cant wait to read the ending!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnd happy. Good chapter! It was a fun read! Keep up the great work! :D

Oooh, I loved this! Great job writing it, I love your style.

I think the ending was a nice way to wrap this story up. Honestly, I envy the girl a lot right now. I'm really glad she got her happy ending though. I guess it's safe to say that you never know what the outcome of situation could be unless you push forward and try. That's what she did here and her outcome was the opposite of what she expected it to be.

Thanks for writing again, Haruka. I enjoy your pieces a lot. Happy Birthday to Chronos too and here's hoping to another month and many more for the Blue Rose couple.

Eommaaaaaaaaaaaaaa THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE BIRTHDAY GREETING, FIRST OF ALL.

Omg bro, that's exactly how Blue Rose and I would act like; More best friend ish than lovers

Major fangirling here omg.
THE ENDING WAS JUST OMG *keyboard slam*

BEAUTIFUL OMG ALL MY FEELS

I support this fictional couple until the end of my life!

Ahem, welp, Thank you again and this is a really wonderful way to say 'Happy Monthsary'

THANK YOU SO MUCH.

I love this so much! Please try to hurry on the next chapter! :D

OMFG LET ME CRY IN THE CORNER
I wasn't expecting this to be the boy's point of view.
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Sorry, had to keyboard slam there.

Anyway, just like the first chapter, it was so sweet and OMFG THE WHOLE TIME I'M JUST LIKE "REALIZE THE GIRL'S FEELING'S ALREADY!"

Ahem.

I'm so anxious as to what's going to happen afterwards omg ghjafajgjgagjfgajkfghajkdfg
The only thing that it really lacks are the names (let me guess, that L girl is Lily?)
Hopefully the third chapter has their names, if not, I just want them to be a couple already.
Okay, I have to stop slamming my keyboard. OTL

I have to be patient.

THANK YOU HARUKA OMFG.

OH! I really like this! keep up the good work!

This was simply beautiful, Haruka. From the beginning to the end, it was a wonderful fanfic to read. I really enjoy it's simplicity because behind it all, it holds a deeper meaning. You put a girl through different phases of love and it's only part one of the threeshot.

At parts, such as when she is confused on whether he is manipulating her or not, I started to get confused too and for a moment, I was a bit dizzy. Strange, right? But for girls, we're so emotional with our feelings and just want the best of things with the right assurance. I also liked the guy and I'd squeal internally whenever he smiled or grinned at her. His wink killed me though.

You said you were worried about this fanfic on twitter yesterday or so, but to be honest, I don't see why you had to be so worried at all. It's a light read, which any reader on here would love. It has excellent grammar and great characterization too. You really developed a lot in this first chapter and that's what any story needs.

Oh gosh, I am starting to get in my critical workshop state. I'm just used to workshopping or reviewing a story like that. I'm really proud of you though, Haruka. You do have talent when it comes to writing so never let anyone tell you wrong.

I'm really hoping to see the next chapter soon, early, but you never know. I hope Chronos loved it as much as I did. This was a great Blueroseshipping fanfic.

I'm gonna favorite and follow this story. /stalks

You know what I was listening to the whole time I was reading this. I had it on repeat. :3

OMG I WAS SO EAGER TO KNOW HOW IT WILL ALL PROGRESS

Wait let me calm down.

I WAS CRYING BECAUSE OF EVERYTHING YOU PUT INTO THIS FANFIC, THEN YOU TELL ME THAT IT'S A THREE SHOT. WHAT THE HELL, EOMMA, WHAT THE HELL?

The blue haired girl with the doll and the brown haired boy's denial and omg the date and the time and omg I can't even. I was seriously crying the whole time.

I had some parts when I laughed, like, when she realized that she was two hours early and she though she was going crazy because she laughed about it. IDK ANYMORE MY EMOTIONS ARE IN A BIG JUMBLE OF MESS.

Oh and of course, you just had to include a dance scene there OTL.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Oh, how I want to see what happens now that I saw the ending of this chapter. ;u;

And, by the way, thanks. (:

EVEN THOUGH EOMMA TRIED TO TORTURE LITTLE MAKNAE HERE BY MAKING MAKNAE CRY. ;u;