Love it and looking forward to next chapter .

Great story!

I saw your reviews of L.U.S.T. an had to come
Over and check out your page.

Your story has a lot of good qualities in it... very thought through, moved very well, visual, interesting and IC. I really liked it! You should write more.

Watch out for those run-on type sentences tho. ;-)

Iii like where this is going. Your writing style is good, keep it up man

haha great story, brightened my day. please update soon

Oh my gosh this is hilarious.

oh this is very good. from the summary it looks good and the story is een better. can't wait for more.

Just make ur move already sasuke! I'm sure naru will accept!

That was totally epic. Man I busted out laughing and everyone looked at me funny. That's how you know its good. I really love Kakashi in this. I can just imagine him rolling on the floor laughing. I also really liked Sasuke's daydream. That was the cherry topping for me.

i really like this, its absolutely hilarious. poor sasuke, having all these erotic fantasies and yet not being able to act on them, its just to funny. i do have a question that i hope you will answer for me though, when sasuke went to the brothels, were the people he slept with male or female? i would really appreciate it if you answered me and please update soon

love it!

Snorts. Sasuke's behavior is freaking amusing as all hell. That alone is enough to tune in for more.