I'm surprised none of them thought of summoning the Knights Bus. It would be funny if the Knights Bus appears and it's now stuck in Middle Earth too! Oh Ernie you silly thing.

How does the bus know which direction to face when you summon it?

I nearly cringed at the title of the first chapter as it is an easy habit to repeat the names but thank the Valar you didn't.

Good thing this fic dead, these 3 chapters are the worst types of fic that have read that any sort of harry potter crossover with lord of the rings... slash fics are even worse...

Says you haven't updated in just over three years but I figured I would leave a review anyway. I absolutely love this story. Three chapters but how you've written it, crossing into LoTR. I'm impressed! Lovely story! Wish you would continue on. :)

An excellent story! Shame that it's abandoned, but hey, life happens.

Nice work. I'm liking this.

Please update soon

Very realistic portrayal! Please continue with this story.

This is one of the best LOTRs and HP crossovers I've read. I do hope it is not abandoned. Thanks for feeding my addiction.

"it was afternoon", better than "the time was in the afternoon".

"among its surroundings", not "among it's surrounds".

"turning on his heel", not "turning on heel".

"serve evil's purpose", not "service evil's purpose".

"bowled Saruman", not "bowled Saurman".

"emotionally drained", not "emotional drained".

"Gandalf concentrated", not "Gandalf concreted".

"Deliberation. Divination. Destination."? Don't you mean "Destination, Determination, and Deliberation."?

"but yet still", not "but yet and still".

"it glittered", not "in glittered".

"stared into space", not "stared in space".

"while watching", not "while eatching".

"The black horse", not "Theblack horse".

"the black rider was", not "the black riders was".

"casual tone", not "causal tone".

"averted", not "adverted".

"you're stuck", not "your stuck".

"increasingly more knowledgeable", not "increasingly more knowledge".

Huh? "snapping his friends in front of Harry's face a Harry blinked." I think that should be "snapping his fingers in front of Harry's face, making Harry blink."

"one of the", not "was of the".

"was altogether one", not "was altogether was".

"to not return to it", not "to not returning to it".

"who he suspected", not "who suspected".

"set out to", not "sat out to".

"his staff stood", not "he staff stood".

"their halls of stone", not "there halls of stone".

"in his heart", not "in heart".

Redundant "in" in "in in the smoke".

"Saruman is one just as me", not "Saruman is one just as I". "I" can never be an object.

"took up a cup", not "took up and cup".

"and for sixty", not "andfor sixty".

"seeking it with all his thought and is bent on finding it and bringing it to him.", not "seeking it with all his thought is bent on finding it and it to him.".

"No one knows", not "No one know".

"Can't have them being uprooted", not "Couldn't have them being uprooted".

"which has infected", not "which his infected".

Need a sentence break after "Suddenly, all of them heard a sound."

"yelp of pain from", not "yelp of pain form".

"circular plan", not "circular make".

"shelves that he could", not "shelves the he could".

No period after "cold for a while" since there's more to the sentence after the quote.

"want any more", not "want anymore".

"around here", not "around the here".

"returns this evening", not "returns in this evening".

"what I do now", not "what do know".

"threw me off", not "threw me of".

Why do people feel free to change how canon characters talk? It really makes them OC if you do that. It's really the primary way characters distinguish themselves. JKR characters never say Jupiter or Magic as cuss words, they always invoke Merlin instead of any deity or power, and only Ron does much cussing at all, despite the fact that Harry gets angry enough to want to.

"knows we're gone", not "knows were gone".

"feeling too weak", not "felling to weak".

"soul was wan", not "soul was waned".

"around his ear", not "around his car".

"out of the house", not "our of the house".

"Weasley did sometimes", not "Weasley did some times".

"sitting him down", not "seating him down".

"my guest here", not "my guess here".

"I was here", not "I was hear".

"some of the less powerful", not "some of the less power".

"weariness and wan feelings", not "weariness and wane feelings".

"past the three", not "past of the three".

"merely a suggestion", not "merely a suggest".

"took him over", not "took him off".

"towards the front door", not "towards where the front door".

"watching the party", not "watching party".

"to know them,", not "to know the,".

What are lugs?

"longer than those", not "longer those".

"likened", not "alikened".

"such earnestness", not "such earnest".

"Harry declined", not "Harry decline".

"had any more", not "had anymore".

"Harry", not "Harryt".

"a few disgruntled", not "a few disgruntle".

"Harry's look", not "Harry look".

"withdrew the little", not "withdrew with the little".

"Come on", not "Come one".

"rudely past", not "rudely pass".

I love this so far!

I love it

Enjoyable