that was a bit sad and well written thanks :)

It's a great story

YAY!

good start to the story, nice emotional side to it, but i was distracted by all the wrong words. For example: stared, not starred; barely, not badly; feet, not feel; hyperventilation (this was a misspelling, but i think its also not a correct term, to hyperventilate is to take fast shallow breaths and is generally considered a bad think. Hyperbaric is probably the term you need, short for hyperbaric oxygen therapy, which would make sense with his damaged lungs); fell, not feel; piece, not peace; that's all the ones I saw first time round, I may have missed some.
btw nice cliffie at the end of the chapter.

I liked it.

Ah. A satisfying death. Good character development for Anakin from anger to forgiveness. Nice touch to have Anakin hesitate to kill Sidious.

Great to see Obi-Wan helping Anakin through the Force. If only he could have done that in the Chancellor's office so many years ago, eh? Ah well. It had to go that way.

Also liked the reference in the second chapter to Anakin saving Obi-Wan's life ten times. :) That made me smile. It was nice to see Mustafar told from Obi-Wan's perspective and Anakin finally giving Obi-Wan the benefit of the doubt.

The only unfortunate thing is that the prose isn't as good as it should be. Wrong words, misspellings, etc. Ruin a fic that is otherwise a nice AU. Technical aspects of writing are just as important as plotting and characterization, IMO. That's the aesthetic of writing rather than the substance, but it still counts for a lot. Leaving a fic in this state doesn't reflect well on you as an author. But beyond that, the story is good enough to have read this far.

Great ending! I love happy endings

What a great story :)

Soooo cute. I love it.
Though it would be better if a beta reader would look over the chapters, there are some misspelled homonyms (like waste instead of waist, accepted instead of expected; confusion instead of confussion)...
But I really like the idea of Vader turning back into Anakin after hearing of his son! Good story!

I liked this. awesome job!

Good saber fight. The only thing I would suggest is possibly to expand a little-maybe have Sidious/Palpatine use Force Lightning or other Dark Side tricks-make it a little more difficult for Anakin to win the fight to add realism. I enjoyed this very much!

This is a fascinating alternate take on the story-can't wait to see how it goes :)

Cliffhanger ending-can't wait for the confrontation. Well-done overall but the last couple of paragraphs in this chapter have some awkward wording. (mist of battle where I think you might be meaning midst).

Another good chapter. I enjoyed the interaction between Obi-Wan and Anakin/Vader.

I'm enjoying this very much so far. There are some minor issues with typos- (Peace where it should read piece of Padme, hiperventilation chamber where it should read hyperventilation chamber, He could badly-should read barely even look...). In one of the later paragraphs, you repeated himself in the middle and end of the sentence which was a little awkward