Fue muy bonita de veras. Eh visto que intentas reecrivirla y quiero decirte que esta perfecta como está. Es interesante y me cautivó desde el principio.

Good end! Thx! It was a nice idea.

It's making me angry! What is this issue with slavery (not your first fic with this theme) and forcing those stupid laws? And since when is sesshoumaru so powerless and cares about what others think? Nope not believable at all but it's my opinion only. No offence meant. Hope it will be better!

Found this on Deviantart Years ago. Always loved this story :) Good Work

That was Awsome

Aawww. I love the ending x)

This was first really sad story, but now it's seems really good -

I loved Kagome's and Souta's mother...

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant.
I'd love t be able to use technology like that though. Life would be so much easier.:)

Rest well Souta you did good my dear, you did good.

Very cute and well written! I thoroughly enjoyed reading and look foreword to more of your works!

Shippo & Souta's relationship is so sweet. Love em!

love it

Aw, its over. Such a good story!

that was great