| Reviews for Runway Takeoff |
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NeckBreak chapter 5 . 9/13/2019 Nice |
ShootingStarz01 chapter 5 . 7/17/2019 Although this was an older story, it was still wonderfully displayed your literary talent! Overall it was a very fun and entertaining thrill ride, and I was a bit disappointed that it had to end. Good work! Worth reading! |
C.B. Magique chapter 5 . 11/10/2017 Gosh, this was amazing, though a little unsatisfying because it doesn't end with the pair meeting in the middle properly. They've made amends but their feelings haven't resolved. One of the things I would have liked to see by the end is a hark back to when Sonic was thinking about how even though he wasn't pleased to be on the date he was sincerely thinking about making it fun for her, not just going through the motions. I think that's something Amy would have loved to hear and it would resolve their feelings for each other a bit. Still, I really love this story. It's written so excellently and very romantically! I especially like that all the characters were in-character because I see so many fanfic writers not bother with the challenge of resolving the traits of two characters to get them together, either out of laziness or poor writing. To me, part of the joy of reading about difficult pairs getting together (like SonAmy) is the resolution of their personalities; how they need to develop in order to get closer. Like in this story where Sonic notices the thoughtful side of Amy for the first time because he has to take time out to listen to her while he's on this forced date and Amy realises that he doesn't want to talk with her about how many babies they could potentially have. And them working together to escape Eggman finished that off nicely. It was such a joy to read. |
starfiction123 chapter 5 . 6/27/2017 I liked this story a lot especially for the fact that it was in character and vivid. The only thing I thought was kind of unfair is that sonic got off the hook way too lightly even though he's not fully forgiven but it'd still like its no big deal and that really hurt her. I mean I don't know maybe its just me but there was no genuine apology or any actual resolution it was more of a make up brush off and so besides that, I liked it still. |
Sonamyfan chapter 5 . 1/29/2016 I don't like it , I love it! Thank god a fan fiction that Sonic is not out of character in fact all of the characters job! |
XxFearTheFluffxX chapter 5 . 6/2/2013 Aww, that was so good! The characters were well written, the plot was exciting and believable, and your writing style was just awesome! I've read very few decent Sonic stories, and even less Sonic x Amy stories, but this is definitely one of the better ones. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I'm definitely going to be having a look at your other stories. :) |
t3chno fr3ak chapter 3 . 8/17/2012 Great job! |
01SonAmy01 chapter 5 . 8/16/2012 Aww that was really sweet :) I loved that the fire theme continued throughout. And I liked the dangerous aspect too. I could really imagine it happening. I really enjoyed it. :) |
01SonAmy01 chapter 1 . 8/16/2012 Okay so I was planning to review once I'd read the whole thing but I'd just like to say that I LOVE the way you've started it, and set it out. I love the way you gave a little teaser and the beginning and then add hints and I love the irony in what SOnic says at the end. Very good :) I'm off the read the rest now :) |
Galexia the Chao chapter 5 . 8/15/2012 Ha! I loved this! Knuckles getting caught and Tails helping out his big bro and Sonic and Amy in general! xD Sequel maybe? With Knuckles getting pounded by Amy? Chao chao! Galexia |
Aamypink chapter 5 . 8/14/2012 Awesome story and writing! They didn't kiss boo who who! Haha! Can't wait to read more Sonamy from you! :) |
Cute Amy chapter 5 . 8/14/2012 It was beautiful, loved everything about it especially your simple yet complex writing style. I also couldn't help admire at how you kept all of them in character till the end :) Honestly I didn't want it to end |
Cute Amy chapter 3 . 8/14/2012 What I loved about this was the actual character development of Amy. :) What a one second twist from miserable to pro Amy, I loved it, where other writer fail and keep her a hostage you succeeded to develop her maturely and not over do it as well. God my favorite lines XD "Well, if he wasn't going to be her knight in shining armor, she sure as heck wasn't going to be his damsel in distress. She could be her own hero." |
cute Amy chapter 2 . 8/14/2012 That was soooo heart wrenching /3 I extremely loved the part where Amy found out about the bet and you oh so "cleverly" XD hid sonic's expressions through the torrent of screams and shadows :) I'm so gonna finish this. |
Sebastain Michaelis chapter 5 . 8/12/2012 Well im happy to help n am glad ur in the FanFiction famil blast to have! N I little tip ppl mite say to change,spin off ,make more to finised ones or stop making storys but DONT ur amazing jus by having it ur way. O n wood love to read more storys so plez make more! Good luck |