Reviews for Mine
givemethesweetreleaseofdeath chapter 9 . 5/27
Absolutely amazing! New twist I've never seen and executed very well! Sad about there not being a sequel but hey ho that's life!
Dianasaur101 chapter 9 . 12/1/2019
Wow. I am regretting reading this at 12 am because now I wish there was a sequel. There are so many directions this story could go now, and I really want to explore those! I hope you change you're mind sometime in the future or allow someone to adopt a sequel. Otherwise, wonderful story.

I never really considered this dark and obsessive side of Paulina. I have to say, this is a new favorite story of mine. I'm glad you got away from the stereotypical "Phantom is captured and reveals himself and everything is back to normal" situation. Things are not back to normal. Things are not okay. These events change his life forever. I'm honestly glad Danny doesn't remember; he would break. Anyone would after an experience like that.

Again, thank you for writing an amazing story. Hope you create more awesome stories in the future!
KyleJ chapter 3 . 2/5/2017
Anyone wondering where and what Maddie and Jack doing this whole time? I mean Danny has been missing for three DAYS according to and we don't even hear a peep from them. Seriously they weren't even slightly worried when the school called saying Danny hasn't been in school for three days? Did they just forget they had a son?
: ,Danny hasn't been attending school for three days
Maddie: Who's Danny?
: ...Your son.
Maddie: What son?
: ...
Love your humor though like yes Paulina who wouldn't want a scrapbook of being tortured
Guest chapter 9 . 1/6/2017
that was great and i hope you make a 2 part i mean i did no think it would be this unique and great

#yanderedannyfan
ridiculouslyhappy chapter 9 . 9/30/2016
Oh my God! Are you serious?! This story was so good, and then Paulina gets away scott free! So angry...anyway, good story!
CrayonPencil chapter 8 . 1/4/2016
Paulina you crazy obsessed creep!
Sorry I had to say that.
Really good story.
Keep up writing!
~CrayonPencil~
Guest chapter 9 . 1/3/2016
plz sequel
Guest chapter 6 . 1/3/2016
woah! paulina is a crazy creep
Guest chapter 2 . 1/3/2016
paulina is a creep
TheProdigalAuthor chapter 9 . 9/30/2015
That's a terrible way to end a story without a sequel. :c Cliffhanger much? But good story anyways.
Rookey chapter 9 . 8/13/2015
Hmmm... I would really love to see a sequel for this because it was awesome... Do you think you can give us an update if anyone decides to take on the challenge? I might write something on it too, if you don't mind (after I get to a good place with my other stories first, that is).

Again, this was great. An enjoyable read, and the grammar was on fleek (which is hard to find, but super refreshing).
Wolf Howl99 chapter 8 . 8/13/2015
SQUEAL! You left it up for a squeal! It's gonna be awesome too! I know it!
blackkyu chapter 8 . 8/12/2015
...well then. Can't blame him there. Thanks for drawing this story to a close! It was a wonderful read.
DANTE THE DEMON PRINCE chapter 8 . 8/7/2015
If you do make a sequal, other than the usual I hope to read it soon, will Sam, Tucker, and Jazz try to keep his ghost side a secret for as long as they can or until he starts falling through floors? Will there be ghost attacks and slip ups on the ghosts parts in getting Danny to remember? Not to mention students being nosy asking where he's been and talking about Phantom. Or Paulina trying to unalive Fenton again. Vlad, the Red Huntress/Valerie, or any of Danny's allies appearing? This has been a great read from start to finish. Can't wait for the next one if there is to find out.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 8 . 8/6/2015
Oh man.
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