I miss seeing updates so much, i love this pairing and wish they would do more with julian in the comics.
Hope to see more soon

YOU UPDATED RAIN!

Wonder of wonders! Now please do not disappear on us. We might start the Cult of One Little Dust Bunny and fan out in search of her. No seriously. We will. Right guys?

Guys?

C'mon, don't leave me hanging here...

Okay, tremendous update, and a fun read. I like the different type of Emma Frost here, but it kind of makes sense since X-23 here is rather different than the canon variety, and she's actually an unusual blend of your own mix with the regular Laura. She's actually got these personalities that aren't her own. They were uploaded into her, which makes her very different, as in I can see her core personality, that which is her own, underneath the other personas that she can imitate. Though indeed, why is she so lousy at keeping track of code names and normal names? But I enjoy the civil conversations that Emma can have now with Laura here.

And Laura getting jealous, and Sofia! Heh, this chapter is so laden with angst. I wonder how they'll work it out, and will Julian find a balance with Laura here? He seems to jump off the edge about anything she says and Laura here is trying REALLY hard to be nice to him, plus with her more unique personality in this story, she can keep up with him more or less, but he's the one having trouble. So weird. I hope it clears up later on or it gets explained more clearly.

Looking forward to more updates soon. :D

neat

I do hope this means we get to see more updates in the other stories, I like the steady flow in Change but I mess the others just as well.

Wow! Arn't they crazy yet awesome teenage couple ship of the X men I love. I wonder if it would turn out just like in Helix... with the twins and all not the other stuff.

Please, Please continue this.

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This really surprised me, I clicked on it not expecting much, but wow. I think this is the first time that I've ever liked an altered personality Laura. Most of the time, people have her swear like a sailor and do so-called 'badass' thing, that the character is pretty much unrecognisable. I love her sense of humour, and the whole 'I got two comedians inserted in my brain', but her core character is still in there. She still has no (or next to no) remorse for killing, and she genuinely has trouble understanding the others. The end of chapter 18 seems to come out of left field for me though, still, it was only one night, so I hardly think pregnancy was going to come out of it. Is this story complete yet? It feels like it has closure, but there's no 'complete' label on it, so I'm hoping for more xD

I liked how this chapter ended, it almost seems like a good ending to the story, though I wouldn't cry if you keep writing, I would love to see more cowpie

ha, i like the personality this Laura has. Good story.

great chapter so come on man show a plus on that pregnancy test

As much as I love the angle you've taken with this character, I am curious as to what Daken's position in the facility is. Also, does Daken have adamantium in this story? I'm beginning to assume that he does since he's so far been able to subdue and restrain Laura seemingly with little effort.

Guest Kimura and Daken? I'd be be more afraid of how Wolverine and Emma Frost are gonna react to this!

Oh boy

I wonder what Daken and Kimura will think of this. Because Julian and Laura pretty much just did what the Facility tried to force them to do. I can't wait for future chapters, update soon!

Not sure if I've said it before but Tomi Shishido is stronger, smarter, faster, sneakier, and a better martial artist than Wolverine

HOLY FUCK! Your back! Hell yea YOUR BACK!

Wooooohhooo one of the greatest fanfic writers is back!