would you like to continu this fic? because i love it and i want to know how is this fic going to end ..
please i'll be always read this once it continu, -when i have enough internet to open my ffn ofc-
please and sorry for my bad english

I hope you'll update soon! I really love future generations stories and I tend to find one with the future gen of Scorpius, Albus and Rose but seeing the Potter and Weasley family (most of them) turn out to be so hypocritical gives me some satisfaction. I have to say I love the OCs and the "terrible" trio in contrast to the golden trio. The fact that all the characters aren't one dimensional makes it better! And while I dislike Albus right now, I can't hate him because we can also see things from his POV and he honestly thinks that what he's doing is right.

I really enjoyed this fic so far! Singing praises for your characterisation and just plainly, your writing style. Your OCs have real depth to them and I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll take them. For that matter, I also LOVE how imperfect each of the kids are. They are adjusting to a new life, big changes, and fighting against assumptions and prejudice. They are all subjected to it and hate it, yet are perpertrators of the same behaviour themselves. They don't really get it yet either. (Fight on Kingsley Shacklebolt!) You've made it really easy to believe that they are only eleven.

I noticed you haven't updated in a long time; nonetheless, I will bookmark this fic and check on it from time to time in hopes that you haven't given up on it. Cos this is real fantastic stuff! C:

The Potter Kid Is So Judgemental Poor Scorpius

I LOVE that you included a Dursley! My only question would be why doesn't he know Albus. I would have hoped that Harry and Dudley would have kept in touch.

I've really enjoyed this, please update?

Update? Please? Please, please? I LOVE this story!

Nice work, well-written, and the suspense just keeps coming. Lovely characterisation on each introduced characters and I am quite impressed with the excellent take you have on your OCs. Can't wait to see the continuation!

omfg this story IS SO CONFUSING ;; LOL IDK WHICH WEASLEY BELONGS TO WHICH COUPLE OTL AND OMFG THE SORTING HAT REALLY HAS GONE BARMY LMAO. I LIKE YOUR STORY BUT I WAS SO NOT EXPECTING THAT AND ALBUS, WHEY MUST YOU BE SO MEAN? OMFG I FEEL FOR SCORPIUS. POOR GUY ;; BUT EVERYTHING IS ALL MEDDLED UP AND WHAT'S HAPPENING. LIKE WITH THE MUGGLE AND SHACKLEBOLT ITS CRAAZY.

PLEASE UPDATE! I AM ANTICIPATING THE REST OF THE STORY OMFG. STOP BREAKING SCORPIUS' HEART YOU MEANIE POTTER.

IDK. JUST THE FEELS, YOU KNOW?

Good Story

Please, PLEASE Update This Story!

What an interesting first chapter! While I do like the beginning I think that the characters acted a little older than what they were, but maybe that's just me. Also, Lestrange? How is that possible? As far as we know Rodolphus nor Rabastan had any children, other than that detail I think it's the beginning is rather unique and interesting, good job.

This is an excellent story, and I enjoy reading it. I couldn't stop doing so after I started, and can't wait until there's more for me to read.

First off, your grammar and spelling is excellent! :D

I like the use of 'nestled' in the start- it comes across as giving some kind of feeling of comfort, like the boy is extremely comfy in that spot and has no intention of moving. :P I also like the use of 'unremarkable' since it sets the main character's personality in one word, and short descriptions are awesome :) He just seems like a regular everyday kid. :) I like how you blend description in with action, like in 'His dirty-blond hair fell over his forehead'.

The way he kisses his mum and dad as fast as possible seems to give me two ideas about him- either he's really excited to get to Hogwarts, or maybe he actually doesn't like his parents too much? Then again, if he kissed them, it's more likely he's just excited. Then again, it could have been artificial love shown there...hmm. :P Maybe I'm looking too much into it, but there's some awesome interpretations you can get from that.

He seems quite introverted (think that's the right word) to me, like he wants to be alone. I quite like characters like that; I think they're pretty cool. :) I wonder if there's anyone he'll warm up to later on. :)

At first, Hal seems rather socially awkward, and I like how well you show that through his dialogue and mannerisms. :)

It's also really cool how you've used the children of Dudley and Bellatrix, since it's mainly either of the main trio's children used in Harry Potter fanfiction. It's a nice change. :)

I really like the vagueness in the summary when it comes to the 'shocking political shift forces wizards everywhere to reconsider their beliefs.' It's really enticing but, at the same time, doesn't give too much away. :)

I like how well you manage the dialogue tags- you use them when dialogue needs to flow slowly, abd leave it out when it needs to flow quicker. It's really smart. :)

I've never actually thought about that either- that it's the members of the houses that define the houses, rather than the houses defining the people. :)

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Here is my critique and some suggestions. :)

. (That is how) To fit in a little better with the past tense, this section might work better as 'this was how'. :)

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Your characters have great dialogue and are very realistic, and they're also very compelling.

Keep up the good work! :D You're an excellent author. :D

Well I'm holding you responsible if I fail my exam tomorrow - I've been pretty hooked on this story and you've distracted me from my studying (not that it really takes much to distract me from studying!)
As for the story itself - it's brilliantly written and I'm enjoying it immensely. Albus Potter is coming across as a complete git (which actually makes a nice change because most people write him as some sort of replica of Harry except without any of Harry's negative traits) but let's hope he sees sense at some point.
I like how you're portraying all the different characters. They all have some negative aspects to them that keep them human, but you can always see things from their perspective to some extent. It's a very realistic portrayal of a group of eleven-year-olds, all affected by the opinions and actions of their parents, and trying to find their own identities amongst that.
Brilliant story - looking forward to the next update!