I know it has been a while since tyour last update. I hope you haven't left it for good. It is such a great story! There isn't enough Joker\ FemShep fan fictions!

I just found this and it's really good! Keep going please :)

Quote: 'What I am supposed to say? Hey, Commander, if it makes you feel any better, I used to, like; soooo totally drool over you. But yeah, then EDI got a new bod, and you know I'm a sucker for upgrades, right?' end quote! Where the hell do you get it all from? Soooo fucking good, love their internal monologue :)

... so damn true bout kadian

Wow, their fight was really well done! Good work!

Finally got around to catching up with your story and I absolutely love it. The banter between these two is great, it's natural and I can picture them in my head while they're talking. I love the way you've written them both. I don't think the sushi restaurant will ever be the same though - lol

Good stuff, waiting for more ;p

awww love this fic so hard!lol cant wait for more

Excellent :)

Oh, the banter! I love it! Tali is so freaking cute, I can't stand it! Your Shep's relationship with Liara is much more strained than mine's ever was, but it adds an interesting twist to the story. Loved the "serious" talk between Shep and Joker. Always such a struggle for two emotionally stunted people like them, but this was very touching and realistic. More good balance of steamy and sweet. Hope you're going to keep going!

Shepard, sending the Normandy and her new boy toy away without her? I don't THINK so! Ha, just kidding! Joker's message was adorable. And I love Aria - she should get her own video game. Or fan fic. Or something. She and a renegade fem Shep are two peas in a pod.

Okay, so after having nothing much to say about the last chapter - wow! This is a long and action packed one! I love how Joker mans up with EDI and takes responsibility for being an ass. That is sexy in and of itself.

'Wait! Am I in trouble? Why am I in trouble?' she frowned.
In her altered state she tried to remember why it was supposed to be wrong to be enjoying this. - Drunk, confused Shepard is adorable.

"Not sure what Jell-O is..." Garrus said, playing it as though her statement was lost in translation; "but it sounds messy and this armor ain't easy to clean." - This is so thoroughly Garrus, I love it!

"Like you're in a position to judge anyone! At least he has a pulse and I'm pretty sure I won't find a 'Made in Palaven' stamp on his ass!" - Also fantastic!

And although I've always imagined that missionary would be difficult for Joker (and having a personal aversion to it myself) I thought the sex was steamy and the bit at the end perfectly sweet. Great resolution to the sexual tension.

Ah - this just gets better and better! "Are you a good kisser?" C'mon, Shep - what guy is gonna say "no" to that? And then when she said the kiss was "cute" - I was all like, "Oh, no, she didn't!" Perfect mix of romance and banter that makes Shoker awesome!

Loved this chapter - my favorite so far! Joker being introspective - as we all know he is capable, despite his protests to the contrary.

'What I am supposed to say? Hey Commander, if it makes you feel any better I used to like; soooo totally drool over you. But yeah, then EDI got a new bod, and you know I'm a sucker for upgrades, right?' - I laughed out loud at this. "A sucker for upgrades." Great line.

Ha! I love that your Shepard is bitter from being rejected by so many, when in the games it's the opposite scenario - she can have almost anyone she wants! This is so much more realistic - the ones we love often don't love us back, and the ones that love us, we don't want. The dream part is awesome, too - I can almost see it! Was your hot tub art the inspiration? 'Cause that's what I pictured!

I love the way Shepard's words make Joker see his interest in EDI in a different light. We all know all that pervy, jerky outer shell is just to cover up the mushy stuff inside, anyway, right? *grin*