:( MEH! Last chapter? :( :(
O_O Oh, shoot not again...Poor Demeter :( :( :(
"We're better than the great Rumpus cat." Haha xD I think Tumblebrutus is my favorite character in this story :D
Okay, now I'm wondering if Teazer still likes Macavity...
:)
I love all the fluff in this chapter! It helped balance out the horrific event that took place :/ haha. Munku/Demeter and Alonzo/Cassandra were especially cute :) :) OH and also Tantomile/Jerrie, and there was also sibling fluff which I adored :D
Beautiful ending ;) Keep up the great work!

This story was awesome! I'm so happy for them...

Last review was me...Cocobutterrox...grrr I forgot to log-in...sorry...But I guess you can kind of tell by how the review is written xD haha.
Okay, back to the story!
Aw, is that Teazer crying? :( SOMEBODY GO SAVE HER! :(
o_O What the heck is wrong with Balin?! I despise him with a burning passion of a thousand flamethrowers...if that makes any sense...xD haha okay anyway...I thought he liked Teazer :( He shouldn't beat her up! :( :(
OH So THAT'S why Balin wants Rumpleteazer! PAYBACK!
Go Munku! haHA!
"We could call on the great Rumpus cat and let him do everything." Haha I love Tumble :D
OMEC JERRIE! NOOOOOOO!
I hope he doesn't die :(
TANTO, YOU DUMMY! (I get really dramatic about these things) DOES HE LOOK ALL RIGHT TO YOU?! Grrrrr...
Okay sorry about that...
Oh gosh oh gosh I wonder what Macavity wants with Demeter :( Update soon! I can't wait to find out ;)

"Jellicle Ball ruined"? Uh oh...I see some serious drama in this chapter xD
Oh, in this sentence: "it was the first time in which she was aloud to sleep..." Do you mean "allowed"?
Haha aw, Etcy's so cute :) :)
Aw, so Eric really isn't that evil after all! I mean, it's not like he wants to betray the Jellicles...:( Poor Eric.
:( :( Nooooo! I really hope they get them back (and I hope their plan actually WORKS this time xD haha.) Please update soon! I must know that they'll be okay! :(

Oh dear, there is SOOO much drama! I wonder if after having fun at the party will redeem himself or something. I'm looking forward for the next chapter. TOODLE-PIP!

"Admetus and Pounvical had Tumble's precious Rumpus cat comics and were making him chase them around the junkyard just to get the comic back." XD XD XD
Just a small note for the future: A couple of times, you have a sentence like this: "Jerrie locked his eyes on Munkustrap, he was the one to give roles for the ball out, hopefully there was one for him." It's kind of a run-on, so maybe you could separate it into sentences? xD Sorry, I'm not good at explaining things. Or you could even add conjuctions, so like, "Jerrie locked his eyes on Munkustrap, for he was the one to give roles for the ball out, and hopefully there was one for him." Just a tip ;)
OH. MY. EVERLASTING. CAT.
Eric is a SPY?!
Oh my gosh...oh my gosh...I did NOT see that coming! I thought he was nice all this time! I love the twist :D :D So is he talking to Macavity? Whoaaaa.
"You said we can talk about how much I love Tugger today." I bet Jerrie never agreed to that xD haha.
I like how you have Etcetera be siblings with Mungojerrie and Rumpleteazer. It's funny to think Mungojerrie had to grow up with two sisters ;D haha.
XD Haha poor Admetus.
*gasp* Is Tantomile his mate? Oooh, Eric is going to be SO jealous! But if he's evil, then maybe he's plotting something for the Jellicle Ball...huh...
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Please, please update soon :)

:D I just love how sweet the beginning of this chapter is :) Jenny and Jerrie were so cute xD haha. And I'm glad Deuteronomy accepted Eric :D And hooray for Mistoffelees being a part of the tribe! :D
"Eric didn't even know what a party was. Munkustrap noticed that, you didn't have to be a mystic to understand his dumb facial expression." Love that line xD And poor Eric. I'm guessing he never got to party at Mac's warehouse :(
If Eric participates in the Ball, I wonder who his mate will be ;D haha. I'm going to take a guess...Etcetera? XD I guess it depends on his age.
Oh gosh :( :( Poor Alonzo and Cassandra and the two kittens :( At least one was able to make it.
You have some grammar mix-ups here and there, but nothing too big ;) It's always good to quickly proofread a chapter. But I have definitely noticed the transition words you have added! :D :D :D
XD Ah, gotta love Etcetera!
Great chapter ;) Please update soon! I wonder how life will be like now with Eric, Misto, and Felicity in the tribe!

Aww, Alonzo and Cassandra are SUCH a sweet couple! I think you should be careful with a few plot holes, like Mistoffelees just popping out of nowhere. I was quite confused at that point O_0

"I thought that I'd never see you again. I have a lot to tell you, Starting with Tugger." Oh dang, I juts spit chocolate all over my desktop!

Well, overall, good job!

This seems a bit dramatic for a simple curse, but I do like how you made Munkustrap's reaction. Bomba's character was a little OOC and I think that Rumpleteazer's was too.

Overall a good chapter!

Balin is creepy...Haha I just had to say that :p hehe.
NO! POOR TEAZER :( :( :( Oooh this is so dramatic! :) :)
Wooh! Go Jerrie! Training really pays off xD
Aww, I'm glad Eric's coming along, too. I like him :)
Awww, kittens!
I sure hope Old D understands! And the relationship between Alonzo and Cassie is so sweet :D Please update soon! I'm eager to know what happens next!

"Tumblebrutus had brought his comics and was reading them so he kept bumping in to the trash cans." HA! I can so imagine that! Tumble absorbed into his Rumpus Cat comics XD XD
YAY, MACAVITY! *cough* I mean...Oh...no...*secretly hearts*
Wow, short fight. Macavity is awesome :D :D
"...her soon was catnapped by Macavity." I think you mean "son"? hehe.
This is a really weird note I'm about to give...It might not make any sense and feel free to ignore it...but right now I think maybe you could use some transition words to make the flow a little less choppy...? It's kind of a small detail...um...so, for example, in this sentence: "Cori ran into the clinic he needed to tell Jenny something." Maybe you could add the word "suddenly" at the beginning of the sentence, or maybe "Without warning," or something along those lines, just to make the transition from one sentence to another a little smoother...Does that even make sense? xD I'm not good at explaining things...sorry! Just a tip for the future ;)
Poor Vicky :(
You might have already mentioned this...But does this take place before or after the Jellicle Ball?
"Right, we can do this the easy way or the death way, your choice." All of the Jellicles put their hands up to stay that they surrendered. "You Jellicles are no fun." Haha nice ;)
"...weather she liked it or not." I'm guessing you mean "whether"?
Oh gosh, what an exciting chapter! I really can't wait to see what happens next! Great job :) Update soon, please! :)

Oh dear, everything slipped out of control! Let's hope Misto's still free! *biting nails*
By the way, can there actually be enough henchcats to outnumber the Jellicles? I mean, how many of them can there be? Hmmm...

Aw, poor Eric :( Too bad Cassandra already has a mate...and too bad that she hates him :p
"In my life..." ...LES MISERABLES! Haha sorry that just reminded me of it xD
Coricopat's magic definitely comes in handy ;D haha.
NOOO! JEMMY! WHY IS SHE IN THERE?! Poor queen!
What! NO! All the Jellicles? But I wonder where the exceptions are...Like, where is Teazer, I wonder...?
Aw, poor Eric...again.
NO! NOT THE PUNISHMENT ROOM! AGH I CAN'T BARE TO WATCH! *glues eyes to screen*
Awwww, no! How dare he hurt Demeter!
NO! Don't lose hope! PLATO! STOP BEING A JERK AND RESCUE EVERYBODY! Either you or Mungojerrie xD xD
Love this chapter! One of my favorites ;) Can't wait for more!

Yay! I'm glad you are explaining how Teazer got her pearls! :D
Haha I like the nice Macavity :) What went wrong in his life? o_O haha
Aw! That's so sad! So it's like a one-sided Teaze/Mac :( Awww...Poor Teazer...
OMEC OMEC NO WAAYYYY! Macavity gave her the pearls! Whoaaaa...
"Mungojerrie took this as his chance to see his mothers cards." XD Haha Ohhh, Mungojerrie...
Dang, Maccy! No need to be so harsh and kill the queen! GAH! And oh no...ohhhh noooo...Is he going to kidnap Demeter now?
Oh, this is something really really small...I just thought I'd let you know...but uh...Jellicle has three 'l's instead of two XD Haha Not a big deal or anything, I just thought I'd...say something xD haha.
Favorite chapter so far! Can't wait for the next one ;)

Oh, come on! They HAVE TO do another rescue mission!
I hope Teazer's pearls' story is what's coming up next.

P.S. Grrrrrrrr, Macavity... I'm going to curse...I'M GOING TO CURSE, I'M-*zips mouth shut*