I really like your Pit X Viridi stories. Could you please make more? Oh, and if it's not too much trouble, could you make some Kirby x Ribbon stories?

This Story just breaks the 4 wall
And That is Cool cause the game did it just like that

hook dark pit up with phosphora

True love.

So acording to Kid Icarus logic, getting to second base means getting infinite flight powers.

Who was the first fanfic writer to have Pit and Viridi say "I love you" out loud? .BOOYAH.

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Nope,Chuck Testa.

Yay! They love each other! Happy Day!

OH MAH GLOB THEY SAID IT!

They love each other! Loved the cameos by everyone. I think I died when Arlon went on a date with Pandora. He doesn't seem like her type :P Loved it!

This is beautiful

The ability to fly thing plucked out my heart but at the same time it kind of destroys the sweetness of him trying to cure Viridi...? Like, I know that above all things to fly is what he would want- but idk it like hes doing it for himself, rather than for her.

Dude.. U ARE HILARIOUS! ha ha ,man that laugh is AWESOME. the story...LOVED IT

Holy crud! I got so tensed when Pit was trying to tell Viridi that he loved her! Jeeze, you have talent! Try to write a story and get it published- I have high hopes that it will!

With all the best,
-KIG

Okay, two things to say before I make a real comment on this chapter;

VOCALOID IS AWESOME!

I LOVE THE BIG BANG THEORY TOO!

Sorry, just had a sugary drink :P

Anyhow, this is a great chapter, and you are really good at capturing the personalities of the original Uprising characters. Maybe, just maybe, could you give me some tips on writing technique sometime?

With all the best,
-KIG

P.S.: Mini Miku says hai :3

Hi n00dl3gal,

I've been reading the Second Series for a while now, and I've been so captivated with the stories that I couldn't stop reading! (Yeah, I'm a fanfic addict! So what?)
The end of this chapter was so dramatic! If you like stuff with that kind of 'ring' to it, if you catch my drift, try watching the InuYasha series on Youtube. You're a great writer, and I hope you find a way to somehow continue the Second Series!

With all the best,
-KIG

P.S.: Yeah, Pit pretty much IS the 'Challenge Accepted' guy.

this is awesome, but i have some things to point out.
1. wheres "second base" its october 3rd...
2. "go, idiot" is two words. :D
personality is more "dark pit" in this story.
4. youre epic.