Me after reading ch.13 " I heard you looked laser rifles, so we put a laser inside your rifle"*hoofs over Machina from tf2* "Enjoy your ride!"

Damn, as brutal as ever, having Joker die so suddenly caught me of guard and maybe its the accent but Yuri, has been here before or at least someone similar and thats cool, just don't have anyone named Nikolai. Now update soon, cause this has gotten good. Oh and don't forget to kill Wosley.

i admit i saw none lf this coming. good job keeping me on my toes.

You're a good writer and your story is really interesting. Keep it up!

The optimism Summer is emitting is almost sad, key word almost cause its really just hilarious at this point. Must say though with all this military power can't help but think this should be going better for them, oh and i kinda want to see someone get eaten or almost eaten you can't start rumors like that about tigers and not do anything with it!

Geez Soarin and Spitfire to the death? I really shouldnt be surprised. Now that we have just about come full circle I am interested in seeing if Summer really will pull through, I personally hope so, shes very likable, but I know you have no problem killing main characters. Thats what keep this so fun, update soon, would you kindly.

Well, we know what happened to those two background characters...

I'm really enjoying this! It's well written, and its really interesting :D
Looking forward to future chapters (:

How you can do this to your babies, I'll never understand. considering I thought Summer would just go home, this is a strange but very nice route for this part of the story. I'm glad to see you back updating too.

Yes! Shortfuse is back!

Very good

Interesting application of a military context into MLP, I'll be looking out for this. Well written with few mistakes, a nice length of paragraphs and colourful wording. I enjoyed reading it for both entertainment value and the fact my interest was held. Good Job! :3

Red

Still here, just been busy lately.

Pretty good so far. I'm really liking it. Wonder what happened to Sparky and the rest. Oh well, you don't have to tell me. I knew the drill sargeant knew summer wasn't paying attention. He seems pretty nice for a drill sargeant lol.

Well this was unexpected. Also better than expected, NOT SAYING YOU CAN't WRITE! Just so we're clear. Gotta ask, is "Sleeping" on hold for now or will they continue together?
P.S. Sorry for yelling/

Interesting... But will you be finishing "Sleeping In The Light" or are we doing a cliffhanger?