:'D so nice & sweet yet sad...love it

It's beautiful.

Whoa. Hold it! Before I continue reading, I have to point out an incorrect fact. You said, and I quote "I despised Harry's own friends for not believing him; for thinking he was mad." Hermione believed him. She stuck with him when no one believed that he put his name in the Goblet. In that sentence you made it seem like Hermione didn't believe him either. Though I do like the fact that Lily wanted Harry and Hermione to get together. I think so too.

this was very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I liked the way you had "I wish he could have known how... his mother was, way beyond the clouds" at the end of each paragraph.

Poor Lily and hope she is there to meet Haryr when his time comes