Beautiful story , I loved it.

This was fantastic! Will there be a sequel?

"Don't make me hex you, Hermione." I wonder how long she'd be fond of James if he ever said that to her?

That's quite nice actually! And a sequel would be cool! I actually now love this story, please continue!

can't help but smile

You did a great job with this :)

Me gustó este one shot, aunque también me dio tristeza...
:c
Aquella culpa que persigue a Hermione.
Lo otro, es que no imagino a Lily con Sirius, aunque él es muy guapo.
:)

Nice story! I'm a big fan of rather odd and rare pairings in HP. I hope you'll decide to write a sequel of how both their lives are. I find the ending a bit of a cliffhanger...I guess I always love to read the aftermath of the story and whatnot x3.

So there can be a sequel? Yay! That means I can beg for one and not feel guilty. Please please please please please mak a sequel so we can know how things worked out! Please?

You should write a sequel to this story. It was very good story btw.

This was interesting, though I must admit I skimmed the smut...I like the scenario a lot, though. I would like to see the sequel very much, see baby Harry (or Harriet, which would drop some mouths), and see if Voldemort and such happens.

A time paradox because of two teenagers and a train...Who knew?

Aww...well, first of all, I'd like to say that the James/Hermione pairing is absolutely impossible and amazing. I love it!

This story in itself would be great as a multiple-chapter one. You could put in a little more detail, help explain anything you've missed here. I just found it, so I don't know if there's a sequel or not, but it would be fabulous to have one.

You seem like a talented writer, I would definetely read more of your stories - especially if they were James/Hermione, Sirius/Hermione, Remus/Hermione, Harry/Hermione, Draco/Hermione, Lucius/Hermione, Tom Riddle Jr./Hermione, Blaise/Hermine, Theo/Hermione, and so many more!

...Yeah, I've been told that I am crazy. I guess this proves it. Keep writing!

Hmm. Well, I've certainly never considered this pairing as a possibility before, and I'll admit that when you signed up for it I was a bit apprehensive. I'm all for odd pairings (obviously - look at my challenge, haha) but this one seemed *too* weird for even me to fathom. I didn't think it would work.

Thank you for proving me wrong.

You definitely took me by surprise by how believable you made this pairing. Hermione's brave enough to do something as risky as going back in time to get vital information for their cause, and it seems only natural to fall for someone who's similar to her best friend. (Even though I despise the Harry/Hermione pairing, I can't deny that they probably did feel more than friendship for each other at some point.) I do like that you didn't make James out to be *exactly* like Harry; he was just enough like his son while still being his own person.

Also, your writing style is a joy to read! Well done, and thanks so much for participating in the challenge! :)

that was great! defo write a sequel :D

awesome!

and yes, I would like to see more of them.