I LOVED IT !

She hadn't even felt this much guilt when Stefan's name had been grumbled- multiple times, might she add- by Jeremy in the car. - i couldn't stop laughing about this one.

great.

Oh, I love this, really do! Kol's characterization, Damon's silly groaning (though it shouldn't be described as silly, should it?), Elena's guilt. Loved this so, so much. Hope you write more!

Hi This is really good. Are you going to continue this with a sequel or even make it a multi-chapter fan-fiction. There is not enough really good multi-chapter Original Family centric stories out there. Thank You for this.

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I like this version so much more 3

i like it.

it could be changed into mutliple chapters though...

I love the way you write Kol in this story. The way he kept calling Elena "angel-face". It seems so fitting that Elijah would have him watching over Elena and playing the double agent. I can see so many more interesting interactions between Kol and Elena. I also liked him giving Elena his blood to heal her after she got hurt because of him. I can imagine Elijah giving him hell for that. I also find it funny that Elena felt more guilt for Elijah for her kiss with Damon.

Awww this was a really good story :)

Absolutely lovely. I await anxiously for your next piece of work. Sigh, you've spoiled me, woman. Please, quench my hunger for more romance and Original goodness!

I liked this a lot :)

This is really good! :)