that's was so cute. The kiss isvere sweet. And I can see Austin do when their dating when lly stress, even now, she's less anxious. That a bit funny to see how you imagine their first now we know how that happen. I really love your story.

That was really well done - it felt like reading an actual episode of the show. I think you have a good handle on the characters and their antics and the Auslly kiss was great. Really good stuff.

This was sssooooooooooooooo good! :D

THIS WAS TOO CUTE!

So cute. Good job

Best. Fanfic. EVER! It is such a great fanfiction I can't decribe it! I can't even believe itvisn't a real episode in season 1! Great job!

That was a great story! My favorite part was how Austin quieted Ally by kissing her and then they did the whole pal punching each other on the shoulder thing. They were really in character too! Great job and I can totally imagine Not a Love Song playing in the background.

It was pretty good but Austin and Ally should have hooked up though

You should make it a two shot

ADDDDDDDDDDDDDD!

To long and it's a good story just to long

Omg you need to write more luv your story line

I loved that!

OMG! That was good. Im obsessed with this show and the fanfics and this one is amazing! I love the who whole random Auslly kiss. I love it!

Have you thought about a career in playscript writing? I'm not kidding; you nailed their characters, both in thought, action, and word. Let me know, and I have a few people I could hook you up with: