ahh! scared me and made me cry! but great story though. Keep writing. :)

O.O' ...

*checks under bed and in closet to make sure a bloody feli is not there*

Ok, he's not here. •sigh• thank you for successfully scaring me for life. No seriously, this was awesome, but now im going to have nightmares...
But amazing story! :D

open throuted bloody feliciano- yes, truly amazing •creepy giggle•

Me- ... GAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! GET AWAY FROM MEEEEEEE!

Wow. LOVI WENT YANDERE! :D

Well this was beyond messed-up, in a... good way? x) Damn, usually it's snapped!Feli I've seen in unrequited Itacest, but... wow. This was... intense. Awesome job, anyway, and keep writing!

Ally

Okay, what the hell did I just read?

It's not a bad thing, but I got confused near the end. That bleeding was a Feli of his own imagination... Right? I'm confuzzled, all my thinking is burnt and I cannot comprehend such awesome writing. O.O

-130-Stars-And-Sheeps

This story was amazing. I've never read anything like this before. It is obviously in a league of its own. Apart from the occasional capitalization error or using the right form of certain homophones, the grammar was practically flawless. I must say I was thoroughly impressed with the story and the originality of the plot. Wonderful job! D

I really liked it. It's sad, but yet very touching. I feel sad for lovi cuz all he wanted was his brother.

I really liked it. It's sad, but yet very touching. I feel sad for lovi cuz all he wanted was his brother.

I think I just pissed myself O.O'

Wewz that was like totally cool...

Poor lovi he is the one i feel sorry for...not feli dont know why...but well i think death is a better choice for him yeah defintly better