Wow, that was hot.

I. Am. Going. To. Faint.

I'm almost in tears here (seriously not kidding!)! It's so beautiful I can't even sgfkghjfjh

OMG - UNF! Great story. Love it.

Please, please write more sub!Sherlock, and plz write more dom!John and make him really rough! :D

I love this

Very nice! I like the idea of John gradually coming to terms with being attracted to Sherlock, and this is great with his gradual realization.

Nice story! I like the complexities of their relationship, think you wrote it beautifully

Oh.

Oh.

If only I had someone to make it all go away like that.

Oh.

xoxox
Wolf

This story is awesome! Love the writing! 3

Phew. That was intense. But good.

Very nicely done with the way you handled John's arch as he came to understand himself and the way Sherlock isn't able to shut it all out until he has John completely. Well done!

You don't get enough reviews!seriously, this is the third story I read from you and I love it as much as the other ones. Keep on writing, your stories are awesome (:

Dear gods, this is way too hot. *Q* I mean, the sudden jump to ultradom!John is kind of confusing but I can't exactly complain because, well, holy shit bricks this is really really hot.

perfect. I don't think I will ever attempt slash with the character of Sherlock that I have in my head and in my stories, because you;ve already done it perfectly. *Sighs*

What I love about your writing is that there's far more to it than the sexual aspect of the story. You characterize John and Sherlock and show the emotional elements of their actions, creating far more of a story arch and plot than stories that focus simply on the sex. It's what makes this stand out and operate as a believable, interesting piece; you're not simply writing about sexual interaction- you're telling a genuine story as well.