Reviews for Fight or Flight |
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![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad thing is, as soon as Chloe took the dead chick's clothes, I was like, "Ew, death cooties!" XD I don't think that's the Edison Group. They'd have no reason to go after the werewolves other than Derek. Perhaps some other Cabal, but not the Edison Group. They were being all secretive for a reason. There'd be outrage if the supernatural community found out what they did to the kids. Like no one's going to notice a freaking raid on the Pack? Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooooooo.. Go Chloe and Jenny! I love all the Chloe and Derek scenes! I love this! Cannot wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Why leave us on a cliffhanger?! I don't mind when there are more after but *sigh* I will forgive you but you'd better post one within the next week or I will come to your house and kick your butt! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so obvious. Either Hayden isn't lying and Lily really is a murderer and is a crazy phsycopath or Hayden is lying he's the murderer and he is the phsycopath. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I love it please write more! |
![]() ![]() chlerek! 3 3 3 3 |
![]() ![]() Sorry if my last review upsets you that was not my intention. Happy b-day |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't mean to be rude but you should have just stopped last chapter. Now I feel as though you are trying to milk a dry story. Last chap would have been a perfect ending |
![]() ![]() Sorry I'm always late reviewing, but happy late birthday! That was an action chapter. I wonder what happens next... And I think that of the two original story options, I think i would be more likely to read the first one, Mystic Journey. I will give either one a shot, though. Just tell us when you post it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mystic Journey – A story about a girl whose tragic family death has haunted her dreams. When she was younger she was given a bracelet, which held the key to her family loss. Should she pursue it? Who should she trust on her journey? I really like the plot :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad ur back to writing and happy birthday :-) :-P ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story and I love it is there going to be more cause it seemed like it with Derek and the pack and chloe and jamie working together |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would definitely read it |
![]() ![]() Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet |